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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I don't think that's the kind of imagining of her in bed that Hermione wants Harry to be doing...
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot of this story and it is very well written. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Your version of the characters are really great so far and pairing Gabrielle with Harry and Hermione is very interesting.
Your version of the characters are really great so far and pairing Gabrielle with Harry and Hermione is very interesting.
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is good but why threesome with herimone
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story want more
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting stuff. Seems strange Hermione's mind has not already leaped to 'intercepted mail' especially since the same thing happened at the start of book/year 2.
Brit slang note; To be Chuffed is to be pleased not to be annoyed.
Brit slang note; To be Chuffed is to be pleased not to be annoyed.
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start!! Love this pairing or tirad if you will. well written. I also like Daphne Greengrass with Harry as a nice Grif slythern pairing. Not enough of either of these. Well done!!!
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome plot
keep it up. im happy theres finally a new story that has Harry being striaght. anywayscant wait to read more
keep it up. im happy theres finally a new story that has Harry being striaght. anywayscant wait to read more
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
why this seem like a good start, i hope this does not turn into all the other harry story with more then one girl, where they bash ron and make him a jerk, or jealous, and just stop being friend with him. i understand this would be hard the girl you love with your best friend but i hope no bashing of ron. good luck with your story.
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed these first two chapters--the story seems to be off to a promising start. I look forward to reading more.