rate_review Reviews

really enjoy the pairing and the direction of the story

Bloody well brilliant as they say. Your work is easily amongst the best on AFF. When I first stumbled onto your story a week or so ago, you had only the first two chapters up. I was worried that this was an abandoned fic, but was relieved to note the date of when this story was published. I too dabble in writing HP fanfiction, and you've definitely nailed the art of dialogue a heck of a lot better than I have. If you ever need a beta, just let me know. I'd love to help out. Drop me a line at lordofsnow999@hotmail.com if your interested.

i wonder are u continueing this story and if u are update soon

ahhhhh, damn. I was just getting into it and then i ran out of chapters.
Write more? Pretty please. *bats eyelashes at you.

Another good chapter. The relationship between Harry and Gabrielle has felt very believable so far. I also really liked the scene with Remus, as he was one of my favorite characters in the books.

Out of curiosity, are you posting this story anywhere else? It'd be nice if I could get some kind of automatic alert when it is updated, as I don't check the Threesome/Moresome section very often (it seems to be mostly male/male stuff, which I stay away from.) This website doesn't have any sort of alert system, though.

Good chapter. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation between Gabrielle and Hermione. And if you can ressurect Sirius somehow, that'll be good.

I figure you're not going entirely by canon here. Since Remus and Sirius did know Harry was getting occulnmancy lessons from Snape. And the Dursleys know they're not allowed to do magic outside school/to muggles.

Otherwise, good stuff.

I actually just made an account on here, just to review your writing.
This story has an amazing build to it, I'm reviewing to make sure you post the rest of it up here!
Im a big Harry/Hermione fan, and I like gabby aswell. so this is an amazing combo for me. i love your style and the way you write gabrielle is exactly how i invissioned her to be.

Keep Writing!

Ryan.

A GREAT story! Can't wait for more. I like how you have Gabrielle feeling the sadness of Harry when they are so far apart. And how you have her angry with Harry's aunt and uncle for how they treat him. I'm excited to see how you have her...explain herself to them, perhaps a little "Veela-Allure" on them maybe, hehe.

I do have a question though, and that would be if you mind if I did my own story using the idea of Gabrielle and Harry being bonded? Not involving Hermione or anything, but still involving them. Your story inspired me to write my own. Before I even considered writing it though, I wanted to ask your permission to use the idea. Please feel free to contact me with your approval or denial.

Also, as a side note, do please check out my first posted story, Finding His Crystal in the Movies > Star Wars (All) > Het - Male/Female IF you so choose.

Sincerely, The Brain

Good story, but I'm a little angry with what you wrote about Bulgaria.
I hope that you'll update soon.