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wow, I am loving this. please continue writing it. I would love to see where you take son this journey. don't leave me out in the cold, dark world alone. kudos

I have just finished reading your story after I found it. It was very interesting to read. I was hooked on it. It is a great shame that it has not been updated for so long(4 years). I hope it is updated very soon as I can not wait to read it and see what happens.

Fun story! I'm liking where you're taking it and how you're handling the relationship between Harry & Gabrielle. You're not going overboard and that's cool. I look forward to your next chapter.

Regards,

the_scribbler

Just curious, do you have an update schedule for this? The reason I ask is because I found it 14 or so pages behind the start page for this category.

Ch. 3

Damn! When I started reading this story, I didn't realize it had been abandoned - or at least not updated in a very long time. It's too bad, because it is very interesting. I really hope you will finish it someday.

I know this is an old story however I would love it if u continued it .

I always thought there was something that could happen between Gabrielle and Harry after # 4 great start please update soon.

I love it! Can't wait until he next chapter is out.

I have been thinking a lot about this story & where you might take it. One thought is that Hermoine (being the smartest witch of the age) will find a way to remove the soul fragment from Harry. As Harry is Serius heir, the Black family libary might be a good place for her to find it. Or Gabrielle through her veela family might find a way. From the plot thus far, Gabriella is bonded emotionally with Harry. That leaves a possible soul bond, & a magical bond. Hermoine could well be the soul bond, being completed with some ritual. The magical bond I see being performed with both girls, (soul & emotional as well). The magical bond I see, needs Harry's wand & virginal blood. With Harry's magicl wooden wand piercing both girls hymens, their magic & Harry's could be tied together. Then as his flesh wand being bigger, their hymen would be torn a little more resulting in more blood. The girls could then be tied toghether to Harry more firmly, by each girl cleaning their own blood & Harry's seman by oral means, while the other girl cleans the cleans the girl herself. (Gabrielle cleaning Hermoine, while Hermoine cleans Harry, then Gabrielle cleaning Harry while Hermoine cleans Gabrielle.) I know I'm a dirty pervert, but thats why I read aff. Not that you need any advice though, your doing great.

This is a very intruging story for me. (By the way my spelling is very bad.) This pairing is not one that I had ever thought of, Harry, Hermoine, & Gabby. I am reading this on aff, so the smut is something I like. I can't wait to see what happens. Also the plot is vert well written. This is another story that is way better than cannon. JKR's work was very entertaing, but boring in some of its predictabilty. The epoluge was crap in & of itself. H/Hr at the very least should have been paired, & for Disney, only a pair together. This has a lot more possibiltys, & a lot more interest for me. I am curious as to how Hermoine, & Gabby work together, especially throwing Harry into the mix. Very good work. Can't wait for the rest of the story.