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for The Pink Lacy Knicker Project

by Koolgirl18

schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Remus and Luna!
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for adding the chapter about Snape and Hermione not to mention the new chapter about the girls impromptu pool party. Did you forget to add the chappie about Severus/Hermione? I loved them both.
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not saying that I don't like the other pairings at all. I just would have never thought of Luna and Remus together, but it seems to work for you. Remus is such a fuddyduddy that he needs Luna to loosen him up. I would never have thought of Ginny and Lucius together either. He's the ultimate Slytherin and she's the typical Gryffindor girl. Some people could say the same for Severus/Hermione but Severus has a little too much Gryffindor and Ravenclaw in him to be PURE Slytherin. While Hermione has a too much Ravenclaw and a little Slytherin to be pure Gryffindor. Whatever. But if Ginny is a hereto undiscovered financial genius...she might be perfect for Lucius after all. So, I'm not going to complain about the pairings anymore as long as Severus/Hermione get their turn in the limelight. I'll just sit back and enjoy the show!
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As if they wouldn't shag those three girls. I'd shag those girls - in rotation - until I couldn't stand up.
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay. The plot for this is funny along with the title, which is why I'm reading it. That and I'm a fan of Snape/Hermione. But I don't like the other pairings, so I was very disappointed when you wrote sex scenes for the others and not for them.
person alecto
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You do not know how thrilled I am to see another writer writing a Lucius/Ginny story. I sincerely hope that they are the couple who will receive the most attention in this story!
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a cute story. Hopefully, it will not take straight talking Hermione too much time to let Snape know how she feels. I think that they will be the first ones to get together. Love it so far. p
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is *hilarious*. I never thought of Lupin and Luna together, but what you've done so far is great. I loved Snape's line in this last chapter about Dumbledore's "lemon candy-rotted brain." I literally laughed out loud! :) Great job & can't wait to read the rest. I have to say that the idea of Dumbledore getting drunk and setting up his charges like this is totally plausible. :)
person savigar
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I'm enjoying all of your pairings - nice job of setting everything up. Can 't wait to see what happens next!
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! A new story! So just finished reading about Remus and Luna, who is one of my favorite characters. I think you really stayed in character with everyone so far and yes, that includes Dumbledore complete with pink lacy knickers on his head while drunk. Very funny as I could just picture that in my head.
Anyhow this is the part that I tell you I love the story and you must drop everything to finish it. Seeing as we all live in real life, I have accepted that you will get maybe a chapter each week or so? In the meantime I will look forward to the next installment.