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for Redemption

by triz

person BluDragon
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer. This story is just amazing. Emotions are flying everywhere. My heart goes out to Hermione, even to Lucius. I can't wait for more. Especially with Hermione leaving and the Warden's threat to Lucius. He needs to be free!!!! Great job and Thank You
person Dawn
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh the drama, indeed. Very intense, can't wait for more!
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so sad for Lucius; I think he really loves Hermoine. But I don't think that Hermoine can survive without him now.

I hope that Remus changes into his wolf form and rips apart the warden and the guards.
person fansick
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story has captured my attention, and I cant wait for updates. (sitting on the edge of my seat biting my nails....hurryhurryhurry. lol
person Dawn
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull!! Love how you explained why Hermione is in Azkaban. Can't wait to read more.
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved the explaination of why Hermoine is in Azkaban!! I NEVER saw that coming...it was a total shock!

I wonder how Kingsley and the others will react to the way that Hermoine has been treated? I hope there is a LOT of hexing against the warden and the guards.

Will Hermoine leave Lucius behind? Will she be able to get him out, or will she stay with him?

So many possibilities!!! Please post again soon!
person Me
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please keep this up! and Give us a happy ending!
person Dawn
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing story, but why is Hermione in Azkaban? Please continue with the story.
person MJ
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intense story. I love all of your stories and I was excited to see a new one of yours. I am very curious about why Hermione is in prison. I feel so sad to see what is happening to her. I was heartbroken to see, she wanted to die (even though under those circumstances it is imaginable she would want it to end, whatever way). Very intense story!
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Lucius thought the "L" word!?!?!?!?!?!?!

I like how Lucius is so gentle with Hermoine and that he always asks for permission to clean her private areas. That is so loving and at first seems so out of character for him.

I know there will be a lot of pain before this is finished, but I hope that their 'imaginary' games come true.

I still don't understand why Hermoine is in Azkaban.