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by triz

schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dark and graphic...wow.

I love that Lucius truely loves Hermoine. The plot is deepening...and I love it.

More, please.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that chapter because it gave us glimpse of how much of a friend Harry is not to Hermione; how easily he turns his back on her, like always. We saw Remus, who I love, and that makes me happy. We saw Severus doing his Slytherin best to help. And, we saw how damaged Draco still is. All in all, yes, a lot of drama and angst. lol

Thanks again, HG4eva
person Dawn
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very good chapter. Will be waiting for the next chapter.
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this chapter makes me sad.

No one even gave Arthur a chance to talk!
I'm upset that Molly wants a divorce, it's so sudden -- I expected they'd fight a lot about and then possibly she'd ask for one or at least get to know why he aided in getting Hermione out of Azkaban! So eager to see the next batch of reactions and see if Arthur can actually get a word in this time without everyone getting their knickers in a twist!

: )
person Dawn
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The emotion is almost overwhelming. I can't wait for more.
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is hard to type with tears in one's eyes... sniffle

I know he deserved to be there, that he did horrible things to put himself there, but it is so clear that he is not the same man. Her scattered memories of the past five years, of him caring for her, loving her, and being her friend, should get him out, where he can start over. It will be a very long time before either is healed enough to function fully, but she is going to need him to help her make it.

This was gut-wrenching. I look forward to more soon, so we can see his release. Thank you, HG4eva
person Dawn
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I rarely cry over a story, but you got me to do it. I will await your next chapter!
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this story.

It's a twist on what I've normally read that involves Hermione. The simple fact that one of the trio is in Azkaban and that she ended up killing Fred ( in this version at least ) and kidnapping Ginny to prove her loyalty to Voldemort is interesting. I kind of want to see how the Weasly family takes to Hermione being out because all-in-all she did kill Fred and she did hurt Ginny... I also am curious to see who is with who and if anyone is married.

:)

Very eager to read the rest of this story.
I also hope they find it in their heart to let Lucius out and maybe
Draco to soften up if he runs into Hermione and hears what's up with his father.
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had to wipe the tears away that were streaming down my face. I have NEVER had a fanfiction story make me cry like this.

Thank you for that moment of unabashed sorrow *deep sigh*
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am happy that Hermione is getting out of there, depressed and saddened for poor Lucius who will suffer two ways in her leaving, praying hard that the guards and warden suffer Hermione's fate for the next 50 years, and hoping you update VERY quickly! Thank you, HG4eva