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by triz

schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why "without Lucius"?? Guilt? I don't understand their reasoning :( It is such a hearbreaker anyway :(
person Dawn
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's almost physcally painful to see how lost Hermione is. Can't wait to see how you get Lucius out of Azkaban and to her. Will be awaiting your next chapter.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ron is right you kill his brother, so he has every reason to hate you.
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For goodness sake! Someone get her Lucius! It's not that hard people!

Thank you for updating and I sorry to hear you were ill, but glad you're feeling better. I hope you can update again soon, because seeing her so broken is painful. I understand that she hurt people to get her job done and that it was wrong, but how can she have not one friend left? Is there no one among the people who called themselves her friends who is willing to listen? So sad. She finally gets her freedom and a chance to heal and she will have no one. So sad. :-( Please update again soon. I need something good to happen for her.

HG4eva
person KellyJCR
schedule May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally we see the full extent of the damage. I love the softness Severus is using to try and rech through to her. I can't wait to see how your going to get Lucius out of Azkaban for Hermiones sake. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting fic and it has me hooked. I like your development of the characters. At first, when I started reading about all of the torture, I was not too sure, but I think I see where you are heading now. The way you are portraying Harry and the Weasley's is certainly a different twist and I cannot wait to see what happens next. While I can see the plot moving forward, I cannot figure out where you are going next, but I think that is part of the fun, for lack of a better word about reading this. I am just crossing my fingers and hoping that you can update regularly :)
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm still here. I ache for them. I don't know what your ultimate plan is for this story, but I do hope you have some plans for peace and forgiveness for them. I wonder if they can obliviate some of the more painful memories from both of them, so they don't have to live their lives with so much agony. I also wonder if Severus helped or hurt more by telling Lucius the truth. Sigh... Thank you, HG4eva
person Stephanie
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really great so far. I can't wait to see where you go next.
person Dawn
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heart wrenching! I could feel the emotion pouring off the page. I will await your next chapter!