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by triz

person vixxxen
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEEAASSEE finish this story quickly, i'm loving it. Some of the more dramatic parts actually brought me to tears, which is a very rare thing. I'm completely hooked on this story right now so please continue the story, as I NEED to know what happens and of course how it ends.
person OlaOlala
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is nothing short of fantastic! I want more!
person loisa
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bawling like a baby ever since i started reading this fan fic. please update soon, this is an amazing heart wrenching story
person markspet
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man this is getting darker and deeper than I expected.

Keep up the good work
person Megan
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord, is this girl ever going to get a break? I can't believe how much she's being made to suffer. I have read many stories where I wanted to smack the living crap out of Ron, but this is one of the few times I've actually hated him. I don't care how hurt and angry a person is, only a monster says and does those things to another person. He's worse than the guards, because they did it for "fun", while he attacked his former "best friend" out of sheer anger and hatred. I can't say I feel much more for Harry, either. He's simply run away from it all. Sigh... I only hope when the full truth comes out, they honestly see and feel the horrible truth of what their "friendship" has done to her. Man, this story hurts. Thanks, HG4eva
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dang it! Evil cliffhanger is an understatement. Don't make me send Ron after you. Just kidding. I'm sure you could whip his ass anyway. Your story is very good. Thanks.
person Megan
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel I should expand my one whiny line. First, I like your story. It is tough reading and I actually skipped few parts, but I haven't felt that any of the violence were sort of gratioutous writing, which I hate. I guess I just didn't expect that the "good guys" will continue with such inertia and without actually realizing that they are way out of the depth with Hermione and their ideas of what might be good with her have no relation with her present reality. They still hold an illusion that she'll wake up to be a girl they once knew. Also, I wonder if Snape will realize the irony of choosing to believe the texbook version of events instead of digging deeper and using your own brain?

Ok, now I'm rambling. Basically, I hope you continue writing it.
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is very intriquing. I am surprised with each chapter.

I cannot wait to see what happens next. How will the trial go? Will Harry attend and find out what has been happening to Hermoine? How will Severus convince Draco to visit Lucius?