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This is a good story but I'm having to scroll side to side to read it and it might be my computer. Can you fix it?

You have my curiousity piqued. It makes Hermione's situation that much sadder knowing that Harry is about to get the family he wants so badly. How mature of Lupin to give a class to embarrass HG because she would not "submit" to him. Lupin (of the baby boomer age) has his work cut out for him with a girl born in an era where women are raised and treated differently than in his time and being a wolf is not going to deter her much...his work is cut out for him. Go Hermione!!! p

ok as much as i hate snape i think it is time i cut him a break. good job as always S

great job!!!! i wonder how hermione is going to deal with remus and his wolf side

Did not see that coming, snape a good guy? interesting way to include harry. my guess for snape's love was way off lol but you still have not said how ginny fits into it. can not wait for the next chapter. S

Yay for the quick update!! you are right that the Headmaster puts the dumb in Dumbledore in the extreme. Love that you have Lily with Snape. Now I wonder if he is just hiding her family there or if he is with her and it is their family (hoping for the latter). One final thing on old Albus and his, do you think I would hire someone who would hurt a student, if he ever says it again, Hermione should point out that he did hire the werewolf that bit her on school grounds during the school year. I am really glad that she has Harry in the know now so that hopefully she will have someone on her side. Don't let her withhold what Lupin did to her to protect Harry...she is only 14 and someone needs to recognize what has been done to her. p

for the second child how bout going with the book and name it teddy, or randi( means Fair, wise judge; wolf shield.") got a feeling one of them will need a shield lol. once again great job and keep up the good work

What a bunch of idiots. Why would they put them in the same room when they knew what would happen? Excellent chapter, but I feel really bad for Hermione. It is bad enough that she had her life ruined for her, but now she will be getting raped on a regular basis (since no one seems to be concerned for her well being). And what is the Ministry going to do when they find out that she is breeding? Very interesting!
Oh, I did not wonder why HG could not smell the sex before the door was opened. I wondered why she could not smell the sex on GW or notice the perfume that she smelled on SS earlier. Looking forward to next time.p

wow i wonder how hermione going to handle that and how remus is going to react to the news. there are so many thing going on in my mind about how this might play out.

i think i know who it is lol. once again great job keep it up