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for The Law of Transformation

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! I'm tongue tied and can't think of a better review. I couldn't stop reading. I've only recently come to AFF and am glad I found your writing, i will definitely be bookmarking you for further reading.
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really good...im glad i read it...hope 2 read more from u soon...
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful fic; Very well done. I think I've fallen in love with your writing style... if this isn't love, then it's something very similar, heh. I very much look forward to seeing more from you.
person SParker
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, you did a wonderful story that had a slight taste of fluff in it,
without realizing you had done it...and a taste of romance that was completely
under the radar without being overbearing.

Veddy good.
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome... as usual. I've noticed u don't normally answer comments on the 1 shots (makes me womder why i add them sometimes
:P )but where do you pull all these marvelous ideas from... and then write each character uniquely AND make them beleavable. I stand in awe of your writing skills and story weaving abilities. Kudos

person Lullaby to Rita
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... this is the best fic I've read in a while. It has everything I love, thanks!
person polka dot
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry does seem to miss the most obvious solution first, but he needs a little more faith in himself. I can sympathize.
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was utterly fantastic and i love how you portrayed them :) it was sexy without being a porno and the characters had the depth they were supposed to (i LOVE your Draco!!)