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for Left For You

by Araea Swiftwind

schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well this will make things interesting.
What will Harry be like growing up without the extra abuse of the Dursleys.
We know he's not dumb and hopefully this will help Sev get passed his past too.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I think Severus is a bit OOC, but it's OK because he's with a small child after all. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! I really enjoyed it so far. I did wonder that if Severus was protecting Harry in school, why didn't he just keep him as a baby? I suppose that's also a really harsh everyday reminder that if things had gone differently with Lily, Harry could have been his. Anyway I can't wait to read more!
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love a sweet Snape and a lovable Harry.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is good, please write more!
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A very strong start so far. Cute scenes. I hope Snape raises Harry!
person Jaylagal
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far I love this story. You see a softer side of Snape and Harry has a chance to grow up in a suitable home. Can't wait to read the next chapters.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, i look forward to seeing wher eyou go with it