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for Finding True Happiness

by CeliaEquus

schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a really cool concept that Peeves emotions are attached to Hogwarts:)
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how Snape is the only one to remember that Hermione's a heterosexual teenager and suggests that she's having boy troubles--brilliant!!!

And Peeves--so in love and in pain but doesn't know what to do about it.

I'm still waiting to see what happens to Ginny personally. Will she and Hermione have a girl time? They should--maybe it will help Hermione focus in school.

Anywho, great chapter!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love is never a mistake, it is an adventure!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story started out very different from any other story I've read which was why I kept reading it, and I'm glad I did. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen between Hermione and Peeves. I think it would be more dramatic if she did get pregnant, she wanted it at the time anyway.
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I would have been very angry with you if Hermione *hadn't* been mad. I mean , I'm surprised she didn't hex his balls off. As a writer myself, I know how hard it can be to write stories that aren't cursing along happily. Thanks for having the guts to add some angst!

As for Hermione being pregnant--I would want it to happen just to see the reactions of everyone in the school. I think you could make up for this angst of Peeves being an asshole by adding funny scenes where Hermione's telling everyone (It would be even funnier if Ron and Harry fought for Hermione's honor--chauvinistic pigs they are but its totally something they would do).

But as always, its up to the writer. I can't wait to see what you have next!

Until then!

Love, hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
schedule April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Definetly I vote for a pregnant Hermione. Still, don't get them back together right away. It's more fun to have them apart for a bit and Peeves does need some time to accustom himself to being human and more worth of Hermione. Try to get him there in time for the baby though, please.
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG Now start the drama.......... good!
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! She finally knows:) I can't wait to read the rest of her reaction
person PoppyMLW
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I could feel her denial coming, but knowing didn't make it any less heart breaking. I hope the next chapter will improve the mood. Poor Peeves!
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, can't wait for the next chapter! This pairing is sort of unusual, but nevertheless interesting. Please update soon :))