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Now for your request for ideas. 1. You must have Crabb and Goyle have her. Even if it is only once, they are both pure-bloods and they (like the twins) do everything together. 2. You do not need to limit yourself to just male pure-bloods. Pansy can have some fun with Hermoine too. 3. And of course the entire Weasley clan IS pure-bloods. Just blood traitors. So there is a myriad of possibilities there!!
I will try to think of some more. I am getting hot just thinking of the differant possibilities.
Poor Harry, may be the only one that she cannot 'get off' with. Wouldn't that be terrible *evil smirk*