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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... Awesome. Yes Kitty Im still alive, just been busy :)
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A really nice fic, the hints at Bella's past are quite intriguing, especially in regards to Narcissa. The highly ritualised magic is not something we saw much of in the canon, aside from at Voldemort's resurrection ceremony and coupled with the legilimens element really added some depth to the coupling.
I thought Voldemort doing spells in Paseltongue was interesting, was the ritual set up so he had to? Was he just showing off? Or perhaps he wanted to keep the specifics of the ritual as secret as possible, so the Death Eater's don't get ideas... No point showing them how to gain more power for themselves when you can instead use it as a gift to ensure their loyalty.
That line quoted from the prophecy was a really effective way to hint at what the future holds...
I thought Voldemort doing spells in Paseltongue was interesting, was the ritual set up so he had to? Was he just showing off? Or perhaps he wanted to keep the specifics of the ritual as secret as possible, so the Death Eater's don't get ideas... No point showing them how to gain more power for themselves when you can instead use it as a gift to ensure their loyalty.
That line quoted from the prophecy was a really effective way to hint at what the future holds...
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story, and the twist ending was brilliant. Thanks for sharing it!
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent fic. I love the way Bella takes what she wants from Harry. I hope you consider a sequal to this fic.