rate_review Reviews

GOSH, your writing skills are amazing, I WAS SO RIGHT THERE...

I felt like I was one of them...
SO freaking smoking

I loved this story. Not only can it be seen as epilogue compliant, despite the fact that I usually hate such stories since I can't stand Ginny or the thought of her reproducing, but you gave the characters thier own originality. Albus isn't a shadow version of his father or a seeker just like him. He has his own quirks, strengths and weaknesses and the same can be said about Scorpius. I also like the fact that you changed perspectives smoothly I have such a problem doing that. I usually end up writing an entire story from one view point and though it's okay it's not perfect. Then again, they always say a writer is always their own worst critic.

Point is, you did a good job. It was also believable. Especially the speed factor. Lots of stories I lose interest in are the ones that just jump into the porn without the PWP advert. I'm a lover of smut don't get me wrong, but sometimes you want a background story y'know. You aced that. It's sorta the whole best friends suddenly have some sort of cataclismic epiphany and become aware of the other as more that just a friend. Then all that tension they were unaware of hits boiling point and thier emulating bunny mating season.

I'll definately be reading more of your works and looking forward to your writing style. May your inspirational juices never run dry and may my muse kick me in the ass and get me out of this writers block so I can finish my own story. *Sigh* Here's hoping.