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by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 12:

This was amazing! Loved it, loved it, loved it! This is gonig to make their future meetings even more interesting! I hope Draco knows another spell that Harry can use, if needed, because I'd really hate for him to be out of commission the next time they're alone together...
person Squeeky
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait until the next chapter!
person polka dot
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting Sandborn to say something about the prophet article. I don't recall the purple potion. am I supposed to?
person SParker
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #11...

Just had a thought..is Sandborn canon or someone you
thought up?

Refresh my memory on the purple potion,
because I got too many stories in my head that I'm
reading...and not just yours.

By the way, when is the next installment of 'The Fox & Wolf'
story coming out?
person SParker
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Hooo!!! Maaan, it was like watching generals get together
and put together strategies for war! :-)

..with the woman in the lead. :-)

Of course, I liked Blaise's witty repertoire, he's fun and
Draco's constant wit with Astoria and her comebacks are just
as delightful as ever. Don't EVEN think about stopping those
conversations...that is until Harry has had enough and decides
to use a spell that whacks Draco upside the head for being
boorish, in an aristocratic fashion.

All in all, good work mah dear!
person kit
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a quite an amusing chapter. I can kind of empathize with harry's hesitance about leaving a lifestyle your used to and going to one where nothing is certain and no script is provided.
Poor harry, being bombarded by three slytherins at once in his home when he has already had a frustrating day. I'm excited to read how the conversation between the four of them will turn out.
person SParker
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #9...

How convenient...when it rains, it really DOES pour! :-)

Surrounded by Slytherins! How ever will he cope?
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 9:

Title moment! It made me smile. Harry definitely seems to want everything to happen in pursuit of his freedom without any visible signs in his regular life. Not very realistic but I can understand where he's coming from. The next chapter sounds like it's going to be great! Slytherin gathering at Potter's? Can't wait!
person Erin_49
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 8:

"Maybe she did have something to worry about" Loved it! Calia's getting really anxious, I wasn't quite expecting that. I knew she would have to be driven away somehow but I thought it would be more of a private thing, what with her being so well brought up and all. I have to agree with Draco on this one, she's not a suitable partner if she can't keep those emotions in check in public. Also, I thoroughly approve of this plan!
person SParker
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #8...

Man, Sandborn is every bit the 'slimy poilitician' you hear
about, isn't he? Can't wait to see his downfall. Hope it's
loud.

I can honestly say 'the stage is set' and the players are
coming out to fulfill their roles, hope Harry can pull it
off.