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person Nubia
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think his plan to take the game to Sandborn going to take time because it is a clever person Draco also good time will tell what will happen. good chapter.
person W
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really have to say, I like Daphne^^ She is one of the most interesting original characters you ever invented!

This story certainly is gathering momentum. Can't wait to see what's about to happen! I really hope that Harry won't lose all his friends because they don't understand the reasons for his bargains. I don't feel he is stable enough to deal with that...
person SParker
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #19...

Okay, I have to ask, the witty sarcasm Draco..and
Daphne...is displaying, that IS all you, right? :-)
By the way, loved the part when Harry was thinking
that Draco would get offended by not being 'invited
to an orgy', had to laugh at that one.

Other than that, Harry's doing a good job getting
under Sandborn's skin..subtly. Let's see if he can
keep it up.
person Nubia
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM


Thanks for writing in my language think that if Draco may change and you might fall in love with Harry.
your story is for me Excellent
person SParker
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about 18...

How DOES Harry plan on getting back at Sandborn???
What does he want to happen, if not by the Slytherin
way?
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I could picture that last scene very vividly. Thanks for being such an awesome writer!
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. So Draco and Harry are just going to have a bit of a tumble and part. Or is Draco in for a surprise ?
person Nubia
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Emocionante capitulo Draco podria saber que realmente necesita Harry pero aun asi no quiere comprometerse solo ofrecer una relacion pasajera?creo que tal vez un poco le haya mentido a Harry y tal vez con la convivencia puedan formar una relacion estable y durera , te doy gracias por escribir esta linda historia.
person SParker
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #17...

1. Hahaha....Draco is a MESS! :-) But, to the point,
as usual...and he's right Harry DOES need to lighten
up just a tad.

'Heroic Manliness' indeed...

2. You know, for their sex scene once everything comes
together, I can definetly[sp?] see Harry taking the
initiative and doing the type of lovemaking...that would
be slooooooow & torturous [sp??] for Draco, no matter how
fast he would want it, with no touching in the 'right'
places, get my meaning?

PS- I blame my spelling on being EXTREMELY tired...seriously.
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

I started rereading this at exactly the right moment. Halfway through chapter 13 I got an email saying you'd updated, and when I got to the end of 16 I'd have screamed about where it left off if not for the update, and then to be treated to seventeen...

Mm. You made my day. Cheers.