rate_review Reviews

how strange for hermione and ron to try and get rid of everything that was gained for them by Harry. I know that they want their achievements to be through their own actions and 'justified', but for them to quit their jobs, leak details that may result in george's arrest, etc, is a little too much. I like Ginny's perspective in how she will ignore the foundation and make her success her own from that moment on rather then to end her whole business based on principles.
I'm eager to see how this all plays out. :)

Luna has always lived in bizarro world, I just can't see Ginny living there with her. But as long as she's not bringing Harry down with here cannon love....

Yes, you did mention that there's a soul for each 'occasion',
I just thought you had a more detailed description of each, like
a character trait.
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about #22..

I'm telling you spreading that rumor has disaster written ALL
over it, maybe Harry should hire a Slytherin for damage control
and I never thought I'd see a Weasley project an air of...restraint.

Good of her to take the high road on this one, after all when it's
all said & done, Harry was ONLY doing it to help...all of them.

Other than that, you got yourself a complex story, can't wait to
see how you 'bring it home'. :-)

about #21...

Hahaha! If I said it once, I'll say it again.
Draco is a MESS! :-)

I have never seen a character as one-tracked minded
as he is...

Harry: 'Draco, this is a simple complex situation'
Draco: 'Of course this is a simple sex situation,
you're the one making it hard.'
Harry: O_o 'I said 'complex'
Draco: 'Oh....pity'

...but he is entertaining when he wants to be, makes
me wonder does he EVER get mad?

By the way, I'm surprised no one has really asked, but
how would you describe each of these '3 souls' that Harry
has for any given situation?

aww, well if that at love, at least it's smutty

Okay, first of all, you are probably one of my favorite Harry/Draco authors of all time, if not my number one favorite. I've read nearly every story you've written and they are all incredible. Practicing Liars and Inter Vivos have to be two of my favorite (I have a weakness for at-Hogwarts fics). Now, for my review: I love Contracted. The contract seems just like something Harry would do. He really doesn't seem to realize how to harnass influence himself, so making the proverbial deal with the devil truly is something that he would do. Draco is perfectly written. A little cocky, but not as bad as at Hogwarts; proud of his family name so he wants to make it better; feeling like he owes Harry; wanting to,not change Harry, but bring out the real Harry again. It's just perfect. I've also decided to review this specifc chapter because of Hermoine and Ron's reaction to the contract. Seems about right. Now, anger I can understand and accept, but they were just mean! Which is how they're very Gryffindor selves would react. They got everything they ever wanted because their friend essentially sold himself for their causes, happiness, careers, giving up any choice he had to do what he wanted and instead of trying to help him to get out of it or trying to understand what would bring him to do that, they get mad at him. I'm mad at them, which is a testament to your writing. I'm even more invested in this story than I was before, which is saying a lot. Excellently written, and I can't wait for more!

I am angry with Ron and Granger because they are so hard on Harry did not make the contract only for good help and I liked the chapter, the next chapter please jejejej.

well, that was intense! <8O Hermione and Ron's reaction to the news was pretty harsh, hopefully....maybe...when they collect themselves, they'll be by Harry's side again. I can kinda understand why their angry but its sad to outrightly see them cast harry aside after beating him and saying bitter words.
I have to admit that I was kind of annoyed when Hermione told Draco that, "He only confessed because we cornered him and he had no choice." She barely just found part of what is currently going on and she assumes to understand the whole thing. Such a 'know it all'. I was happy when Draco just cut off the connection instead of listening to her rant on about the difference in slytherins and gryffindors.
I'm excited to read the next chapter and see how Draco will get Harry out of his depressive state!!

about #20...

1. Hermione shivered. "Harry. No. You couldn't have hidden that from us. You can't act that well."
- oookay..I'm not Harry, but even I felt a little insulted by that comment.

2. Ron closed his eyes, and opened them. "I wouldn't have got into the program on my own?" he asked in a leaden voice..
- uhhh...HELL noooo!!! Ya' just ain't that good! Next!

3. All in all, I won't say how I REALLY feel about those two narrow-minded individuals who act like they've
forgotten that Harry is a self-sacrificing individual & has always been since they were kids!!! Have their
brains leaked since they started working in the Ministry..or did Harry make them feel THAT incompetent?

I've enjoyed your work for some time, but have neglected my duty in reviewing.
My apologies.
This is one of my favorites, because of the intricacies and detail work. I do hope to see more, and soon.