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by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems like its all wrapped up unless Sandborn going to go after Harry more.
person SP777
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #28...

1. You know, of all the things said in this chapter, the
words 'helpless chick' threw me for a loop. :-D Damn..
that's some serious 'ghetto' slang, right thar... ;-]

2. You know, not to sound insensitive, but I really don't
care for Ron & Hermione in this story. They could be a footnote
or fade completely out, if you ask me. I care more about
how Harry is going to work this out...and the pillow talk
between Harry & Draco.

just being honest...and where is Astoria?
person polka dot
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I dont' see how arresting Harry is going to make Sandborn not look worse to the press.
person polka dot
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ugh points off draco for the wand joke, but they finally knocked the wizard boots!yeah...
person SParker
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #27...

Hahaha..oh come ON, Harry's not THAT clueless. :-)
He got some smarts upstairs, give the man a break.

He just made a stupid decision, being the former
Gryffindor he was...and still is. Besides I think
Draco will take him anyway, despite how clueless
Harry can be.

Besides, SOMEone has to be the brains in the
relationship, right? :-)
person dust in the wind
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i just noticed something. you are writing all my favorite stories. *gets down on my knees and kisses your feet*. keep it coming.
person SParker
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #26....

Well, now we just wait & see what the consequences
of the meeting will be.

O_O Oh, and thank you for putting the three souls
explanation in there, Lomona. O___O
person polka dot
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think there would be more panic in the air. Harry is jobless in this economy. bad days ahead
person SParker
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #25...

I don't know if I've said this before, but Draco is a 'mess'. :-)
He IS fun to read in this story, doesn't take himself seriously,
which is good.

It's also good to see Harry IS able to take care of himself, for
a minute or two..or three, I thought he needed folks to hold his
hand. SO, to see him take action is nice.
person SParker
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

1. Good lawd...it JUST occurred to me, 20+ chapters later, that
your titles are based on 'time'. Is there a reason for the theme?
Does it mean that time is running out or something?

2. ????....Did you just give Draco Malfoy, a Muggle equivalent of
a ringtone...in his FLOO system? O_o