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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #43...

I must admit I was tickled to death watching Harry's reaction
to Laura, he was like Rikki Tikki Tavi...chittering madly while
trying NOT to. :-)

...and poor Draco, he's like 'I'm trying to play peacemaker here!
How did I end up in THIS reverse situation??'

You know, me thinks you enjoy writing THIS story more than any
others.

Sooo, Lucius is trying to slink his way into Harry's graces?
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! harry is finally settling into thinking of the manor as home.
Lol, I do like Laura and i think she'd be a great birth mother for their kids... and so the off spring problem is sorted. ^^
Luc you twat, what are you up to now?
person NightLo
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally they get along like a real couple, with a real wedding...so how would the Weasleys reponse to this? Ginny? Molly? Hermione? Any inclusion on how to get rid of the beast?
person SP777
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #42...

1. He turned around, clasped Draco's hand and raised it to his lips, and waited until
Draco locked eyes with him, frowning. Then he whispered, "Draco, will you marry me?"


...and the Harry & Draco fans around globe rejoiced, with MUCH fanfare, revelry AND margaritas
of the HAPPY union! :-p

Author: ...they haven't got married yet.. O__O;
SP777: ...weeelll, then we will drink some more theeeeen! :-D

I was hoping you would end it like that, 'course I had a speech in my head, but hey...it's
allll good!

2. Now, about the meeting at the restaurant...

Harry: somewhat-composed, responsible adult
Ian: generous, giving too rational adult [I HIGHLY suspect his a$$ at this point]
Draco: fur bristling, snarling rabid wolf, with tail in the air & drooling jaws of DOOM

..and THAT was my impression of the meeting at the restaurant, nuff said.
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THAT waas really sweet the way the proposed to each other. I hope ian finds someone nice. Thsi was something of a non starter for him. the effects of the various interupted bonds wwere interesitng.
It'll be fun seeing what cerimony they settle on and whether luc tries to intervien again. They still have quite a bit of wrap up and issues to deal with.
person NightLo
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start, just hope whatever the Malfoys do will think about Harry's feeling before acting!

Still waiting the appearance of Hermione and Ron and Lucius and the lead on the case...
person Shulan33
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY~! HOT lol

loved it... even though i'm not a huge fan of draco topping i can deal. lol
They are together and that is all that matters haha
Though i was wondering about harry's scars... i guess he'd have to be propped up lol. ( The scars on his back i mean)
I"M SO HAPPY ~!

can't wait till the next chapter~
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah hot, hot, hot? I think so. Loma, you do brillient smut. that was awesome. they're so into it and each other.
they still have a bunch of problems to sort but now they;ll have a steady base to do it from. Will there be any more bands for the ring or will four cut it?
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:P
Dammit, I want my spoilers. *pouts
I'm glad Harry got a bit of his poisoned family life out in the oopen. Now that Draco is awear of the causes of some of Harry's behaviours, he can start helping Harry work on them.
Even though nothing much seemed to happen in this chappie, why does it feel like a lot happened. hmmm.
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
one of the best smex scenes I read.Worth waiting:)