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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I'm enjoying the story, and I look forward to Ch. 5!
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #4..
"Harry, you are being rude," she said softly. "I have asked you to call me Narcissa."
-damn, for a second, I thought she was going to bitch-slap him. O_o
You know, I find myself actually becoming..impatient while reading this.
When are the fireworks going to start??? When is Ginny going to get kicked
to the curb??? When will Harry & Draco make a connection???
I wanna knooooow!!!!
"Harry, you are being rude," she said softly. "I have asked you to call me Narcissa."
-damn, for a second, I thought she was going to bitch-slap him. O_o
You know, I find myself actually becoming..impatient while reading this.
When are the fireworks going to start??? When is Ginny going to get kicked
to the curb??? When will Harry & Draco make a connection???
I wanna knooooow!!!!
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
din think Harry would have it in him to lie to his friends and family. Pity none of them are dark enough to have connetions... or the will, to assasinate Malfoy sr.... it'd take care of a lot of problems. :P
Still, Harry's reaction to the room and his scars are most intriguing.
I eagerly await more.
Still, Harry's reaction to the room and his scars are most intriguing.
I eagerly await more.
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wowwie I really am getting into this, so you have me during over the scars here. And draco can be such a pounce but I love him all the same. Lucius needs to be hit over the head with a frying pan. Write more soon please!
KCK-Lumcer
KCK-Lumcer
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 4:
I really don't think the best way to convince people that you're content with your marriage is to inadvertently restrain and almost kill someone with reflexive magic on the first day... There must be something really serious about those scars. Has Harry had other outbursts like this before? I find it a bit weird to believe that the other Aurors are so accepting of this display of power, even as they recognize that it's dangerous. I'm also curious what happens if there's no light when Harry wakes up. For some reason the movie Shrek comes to mind, even though I don't think that's quite it. :P
I really don't think the best way to convince people that you're content with your marriage is to inadvertently restrain and almost kill someone with reflexive magic on the first day... There must be something really serious about those scars. Has Harry had other outbursts like this before? I find it a bit weird to believe that the other Aurors are so accepting of this display of power, even as they recognize that it's dangerous. I'm also curious what happens if there's no light when Harry wakes up. For some reason the movie Shrek comes to mind, even though I don't think that's quite it. :P
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
Damn, just as I was getting into it...the chapter
ends. Your chapters are TOOO short! *pouts*
Anyway, I like this and Narcissa playing Devil's
Advocate [you should do a story with a tiltle like
that] for Harry is..well it has me cackling..evilly.
Is that a word evilly?
Damn, just as I was getting into it...the chapter
ends. Your chapters are TOOO short! *pouts*
Anyway, I like this and Narcissa playing Devil's
Advocate [you should do a story with a tiltle like
that] for Harry is..well it has me cackling..evilly.
Is that a word evilly?
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Narcissa is one of my accidental favourite characters, and I'm really happy with the way you portray her here. Definitely looking forward to more of this.
Narcissa is one of my accidental favourite characters, and I'm really happy with the way you portray her here. Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
there you go again, answering most of my Q's in the chappie. ^^
I know you said this one would be long ish... but i am curios to know how thwy get around the need for heirs when they discover they love each other... and when is Luc going to finish his hissy fit.
I know you said this one would be long ish... but i am curios to know how thwy get around the need for heirs when they discover they love each other... and when is Luc going to finish his hissy fit.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 3:
Tisk, tisk. Lying so early in the marriage? :P I loved that actually. Much more in character than having only each other to talk to about something so serious. I had a big respect for Ginny moment when she wouldn't let Harry kiss her. As much as I don't like her being involved because she's usually in the way of our boys I did like her having dignity instead of being an annoying little fangirl about it. That happens too often. This put her on a parallel with Astoria, even though the two would probably consider each other so different, and that was also refreshing. I so curious about what happens when someone touches the rings! I'm hope that will play apart later on so I get to see it!
All that aside, my favourite part of this chapter was about the Malfoys' view of Harry as part of the family. Draco saying Harry wasn't "were he belonged" and Narcissa saying that he was theirs. That strong pull of family will be a very strong pull. As much as the Weasleys have a sense of family it doesn't seem like they would be THAT inclusive and protective.
Tisk, tisk. Lying so early in the marriage? :P I loved that actually. Much more in character than having only each other to talk to about something so serious. I had a big respect for Ginny moment when she wouldn't let Harry kiss her. As much as I don't like her being involved because she's usually in the way of our boys I did like her having dignity instead of being an annoying little fangirl about it. That happens too often. This put her on a parallel with Astoria, even though the two would probably consider each other so different, and that was also refreshing. I so curious about what happens when someone touches the rings! I'm hope that will play apart later on so I get to see it!
All that aside, my favourite part of this chapter was about the Malfoys' view of Harry as part of the family. Draco saying Harry wasn't "were he belonged" and Narcissa saying that he was theirs. That strong pull of family will be a very strong pull. As much as the Weasleys have a sense of family it doesn't seem like they would be THAT inclusive and protective.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Typo? "His ancestors hadn't cared about Malfoy hairs and their spouses giving their bodies to other people;" Anywho I think this story is growing on me. I prefer the stories where Harry and Draco aren't completely horrible to each other.