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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry has a hard head and I wonder how long it will be before he realises that Narcissa at least is genuine in her efforts for his comfort.
And how long it will take until we get the back story on the scars (hint hint nudge hint... yeah, i know sublte as a brick in the face. ^^)
Harry had a point about his kids name though. Of course he's going to want to carry on the potter line... and possibly the black line to if he inherited that. Suprised Draco would poke him over that.
person Minue
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Ginny, if not Harry, is giving up so easily on the contest issue. The Malfoys stood higher in public regard and in property the last time the law was invoked, but this time? Harry is heir to both the Potter and the Black properties, and he is the saviour of the wizarding world, while the Malfoys are deatheaters. I think things are quite different now.
person NightLo
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally find enough time to go through the missing chapters...it is really a new start between not only the two of them, but maybe 3 families (the Malfoys, the Greengrass as well as the Weasleys) - would they have any meetings involving all of them? Such as having meeting between Narcissa as well as Molly...Molly would be so so worried...how's about Ron and Hermione? Would they visit Harry at the Manor? Would we see Blaise and Pansy?

I esp. like how Narcissa try to make Harry being more comfortable at the Manor...just wondering what kind of relationship would it turn out, esp. when Draco and Harry make the marriage become real...
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh, Draco's getting all firey. ^^
Still if all forced marriages end up getting the Malfoy's what they want, doesn't this mean the longer Luc holds it the less chance he has of heirs? This is soooo gonna come back to kick his tail.
btw I had a thought. Harry is a sole heir of 1 maybe 2 noble families... surely there'd be legislation about that somewhere. I doubt the ministry anf the families themselves would want them to die out cause their sole heir was filched. at least 1 of his kids or grand kids should be able to take the name... or would they just get subsumed by the Malfoys... that'd suck
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 5:

Go Narcissa! I am really enjoying her soft conversations with Harry. If she keeps it up I feel like she'll have a chance of winning him over. I love this whole business about Draco believing that Harry belongs at the Manor even as he is extremely frustrated by the circumstances. I hope he finds some other way to exercise his "aggression at seeing his husband". :P I can't wait to see what Draco is going to show us in the next chapter but I'm also insanely curious about what happens to Harry in the dark. Something like his muscles withering away? That gives me the creeps but I still want to know!
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I am getting burned out of slash because right now I am hoping that Harry does end up with Ginny. I will stick with this story as I am curious about the darkness that has Harry in its grip.
person Mdunlap
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Yes. Still dislike this Draco, think he doesn't deserve Harry, REALLY wish he would get his lazy arse humiliated in public. Oh, and Pansy too. Maybe if she managed to hurt Harry with whatever trash she intends to send as a gift, maybe Draco could be implicated as an accessory and the two of them could spend some time in Auror custody. Such pretty dreams I can think of.
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again, I /love/ your Beautiful writing style. I really can't wait to see where you take Malfoy and Potter in this fic.
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm very anxious to hear what those scars are all about. You've really intrigued me. More soon, please.
person Narcissa Black
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Draco is being such a huge a---wipe, I almost wish this wasn't a H/D. Truly, he doesn't deserve Harry. Way beyond the fact that this is entirely his family's fault, I thought his distain of Harry's lack of knowledge regarding this type of marriage was unreasonable and childish. Not sure I've ever disliked a Draco as much as I do this one. Disappointed in Narcissa for carrying tales back to Draco behind Harry's back as well. Quite the trust builder, she is. Between the 3: Lucius, Draco and Narcissa, they don't seem to have redeeming qualities, do they?