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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

person NightLo
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start: the beast being killed, possible re-establishment of father-son relationship as well as some merry time...BTW when will Harry talk about Dursley? Will he invite them?
person polka dot
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww, they are at that sickeningly sweet stage. sigh
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
She does rather, doesn't shee. Write brillient stories i mean.
So Harry is currently a crispy critter, Draco, reluctantly, recognises were Luc is coming from and the bond still isn't quite fixed yet.... oh, and they are very definately still getting hitched. that a basic over view of thiis chappie to date?
Cissa rocks... and is a rock. What would Draco do without her. ^^
I hope Luc learned his lesson, becomes less of a twat and is re admitted to the family. No fun being an outsider in your own home. I'm sure Cissa misses him, despite his twat ish tendencies and behaviour.
the reactions between Ron/Mio and Draco make me grin and yay to Draco for getting Harry to rest rather than plot. ^^
Looking forward to more as always.
person Polka dot
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so is Harry Crispy now, hehehe
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG You are awesome!! Thank you for updating!
person Lumcer
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your imagination! I have a fear this story has just about run its course... Unless you have another twist in the making. Thank you for all the updates and I'm sorry it took so long for me to check back in with this story.

KCK-Lumcer
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can I just say... AWESOME... frekin EPIC! Have I mentioned how much i love your writing recently. Terror to fight Terror. That's osme fire with fire and the last bit with the rings. just fantastic. Something new for the Malfoy books, neh? So, does this meanm they are officially re hitched now?
person NightLo
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Even though we know Harry will make it, yet it is always great to know that Harry values himself / his presence more than he thought. I always have an impression that the canon Harry undervaluated himself in different senses, though he chose to come back, it was because to fulfill his duty, to finish off Voldemort rather than for his own...and now you have found a solution to my problem, thanks!
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 47:

This was a great chapter! There were so many things I liked about it but most of those things were to do with the mind bond. It was really intersting to me that, while Draco said that spouses were one person he couldn't get through the flames. Was this because the marriage bond was forced and happened after the beast was already attached to Harry? Your description of Harry's mind was definitely engaging and believable which is no small feat when his state of terror was so extreme. Well done! *applauds* The interactions between Harry and Draco at the end of this chapter were very sweet and I love the "I chose you" cobalt that made the rings smooth. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay Harry! I was so worried about him!