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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #6 & 7...

1. Draco made some very good points, too bad the both
of them are at an...impasse?

2. Uhh..who died and made Ginny Weasel an uppity
bee-atch? Damn, I can't wait until she's gone...what
an annoying character from the HP universe.

3. Sooo....we get to see what is really going on
with Harry's scars??? Sounds like he was attacked..by
a tree. O_o
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 7:

Wow! This was intense! I love how the conversation about not changing behavior or telling anyone was directly followed by the attack that will make at least some explaining necessary. I like this whole idea of the marriage bond changing them from the inside as well as just their outward pretending. Lovely chapter!
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah, super messed up Harry. He seriously needs whatever the magical equivalent to a shooting range is for stress relief.
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looooved!!!
person Jada123
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh this story make me smile :D I just want them to get together so bad already! But you do have a very skilled hand at weaving the anticipation, to which I acredit your very fine writing skills. So pplllleaaseee update soon! Before the anticipation kills me ;)
person Mdunlap
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made a step, I'll admit. Harry covered himself in glory explaining why he wanted children of his blood and his name. Draco was grasping at straws when he said it was an odd want. The chicks are choosing fabric swatches for their roost right now.

I will look forward to the gift causing Draco much trouble. Unfortunately, the odds are against it being as much trouble as he deserves.
person W
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I wonder if Harry ever thought of himself as acting like a Pureblood^^
But I'm a bit worried: Is this bond like an ordinary marriage where you get your name back after the divorce? Because I wouldn't put it past the Malfoys to try to keep their divorced spouses under their thump by insisting they keep the name Malfoy even after the divorce... And I don't think Harry would react very well if that were the case...

Anyway, I'm really curious where Harry got his scars from. Can't wait to see^^

Brilliant chapter, as always!
person SParker
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

I like how Narcissa seems to be the one
reaching out to him. I hope she is the one
he reaches for, when he encounters his darkness
at the Manor.

..and what is it that Draco has to show?
Unless he's going to give a history lesson, which
would be interesting.
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 6:

This was updated fast! I'm impressed! I'm also impressed that we're seeing some cracks in Harry and Draco's personas in front of the other person. The Malfoy statues are super cool. I'm wondering what it means that Harry's scars don't show up but I'm sure we'll figure it out later. I'm amused that this is Harry's first doubt about Ginny, that he only wants her for the children she can bring him. I'm interested to see how that issue eventually gets reconciled... Would the equilibrium between the Malfoys and the Potters shifting after the marriage lead to more debates on the issue of name and inheritance, etc? Or is that already a done deal now that Harry is a part of the Malfoy family?
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am curious, I know the two will remain together since its a H/D story but if the bond was to break would Harry's statue disappear? I am wondering for the children they would surrogates?