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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, it's nice to know I'm not the only one worried about childrens. XP
Lucious, you worm. You utter, utter slime. I swear he's not all there the way he's carrying on. Childish doesn't begin to describe it. Where'd the smooth, slippry lucious we all loved to hate go. This attempt at control is kinda clumsy. Draco's not gonna be happy about this.
Lucious, you worm. You utter, utter slime. I swear he's not all there the way he's carrying on. Childish doesn't begin to describe it. Where'd the smooth, slippry lucious we all loved to hate go. This attempt at control is kinda clumsy. Draco's not gonna be happy about this.
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April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems as if Lucius has forgotten that he can only hold the bond over them as long as he's alive. I would love to see a reminder that his unfortunate and untimely death would release the bond and that an Auror might know exactly how to engineer such a death, couched in such language that Pensieve testimony would be open to interpretation. In actuality, I find the lack of action against Lucius to be disappointing at best. As head of the family, perhaps Draco should take away every single privilege Lucius has, just as a reminder that he can, Lucius would understand that. Right now, he thinks Draco is weak. I would have to agree.
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still greatly enjoying this story! I hope there is more and soon!!! Keep hands to the keyboard or pen to paper which ever you prefer!
KCK-Lumcer
KCK-Lumcer
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
Wonderful chapter! It was such a nice interlude
between them, even if they were 'feeling each
other out' and seeing where the other stood, at
least on Harry's part.
What can I say...I like reading chapters where
there is some type of reflection of some sort.
Wonderful chapter! It was such a nice interlude
between them, even if they were 'feeling each
other out' and seeing where the other stood, at
least on Harry's part.
What can I say...I like reading chapters where
there is some type of reflection of some sort.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. I'm thinking that Harry needs to stop being so damn stubborn and face reality, haha. Fanfictions like these make me love Draco just a bit more with each story I read. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely as always. I have read all your works now.
My heart skips when you post something new.
Keep up the excellent work.
My heart skips when you post something new.
Keep up the excellent work.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
in spite of the progress made Harry is still pretty deep in denial huh. But I'm glad he's slowly starting to come around. I'm suprised he hasn't cracked having to carry all that alone, especially with that hints that he had to do something more than jusut kill the thing to get away. I'm glad he at least talk about it to Malfoy. I look forward to finding out who is still hunting him and why.
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It kills me that the two of them are still struggling to trust each other, but it's so fitting at the same time. They are each so set in their respective points of view; of course it will take time to see past themselves. :) I'm glad to see it starting. Harry's story is heartbreaking. I am worried for him, for what may have happened as a result of the kidnapping and the attack. I am SO curious about the whole thing! Who? Why? What was that thing and what did it do and can it stay far away from me, please? ;) I know you can't answer any of that, but I'm still dying to know. I'm looking forward to Harry learning to value himself and to trust Draco and Narcissa. Thanks for updating so frequently! I always love your writing.
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #9...
Dang, I need to get on the ball, you're updating
faster than I can review. :-)
1. Okay, it wasn't a tree he was inflicted with, but
a 'blood/magic-sucking-sounds-like-a-damn-leech' creature.
All I can say is....damn. *shudders* O_o
2. I can see the understanding is at least developing
between them. Now, we need some openess of some sort from
Harry and Draco's ability to be able to LISTEN without
inserting comments when it isn't necessary OR to put it
simply he needs to show some damn tact more often.
3. You know it been awhile since you've done a cringe-worthy
story, though this IS tame compared to 'Forgive Those
Who Trespass', now THAT was like looking at a horrible
accident, but you couldn't turn away from it. :-)
3. By the way, it sounds like...or maybe I should say the
wizards who took Harry were they looking at him as some
sort of sacrifice?
Dang, I need to get on the ball, you're updating
faster than I can review. :-)
1. Okay, it wasn't a tree he was inflicted with, but
a 'blood/magic-sucking-sounds-like-a-damn-leech' creature.
All I can say is....damn. *shudders* O_o
2. I can see the understanding is at least developing
between them. Now, we need some openess of some sort from
Harry and Draco's ability to be able to LISTEN without
inserting comments when it isn't necessary OR to put it
simply he needs to show some damn tact more often.
3. You know it been awhile since you've done a cringe-worthy
story, though this IS tame compared to 'Forgive Those
Who Trespass', now THAT was like looking at a horrible
accident, but you couldn't turn away from it. :-)
3. By the way, it sounds like...or maybe I should say the
wizards who took Harry were they looking at him as some
sort of sacrifice?
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, now thr truth is finally coming out. Gotta be hard on Malfoy (it was already hard on Harry) to have your worldview on someone suddenly shift and to have to admit it. No one likes admitting to their mistakes. If Draco ever finds out about the Dursleys he'll understand more... and probably be kicking himself over it... or whatever the genteel malfoy equivalent is. ^^