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I like this a lot, i just wish there was some actual progress already ffs! lol

about lucky #13...

Damn Harry, got claws...with that hiss??? O_o

Well, it's no wonder Harry's feeling a little
endearment towards Draco, if he keeps grabbing
Harry's hand every 5 minutes. :-)

Other than that, looks like progress is being made
getting our boys together.

Oh wow AFF is finally letting me review again. It's been really picky lately. I can understand Harry's frustration. It's the story of my life now. Anyway I do see Draco being very vindictive even if it makes him unhappy. But living well is the best revenge. he would be better off throwing Lucius out of the house. I'm sure daddy would be thrown in Azkaban in no time at all.

So good! I love this story!!

Even though the chapter was mostly just dialogue between draco and harry, I was intrigued by how they would handle the situation with lucius and just couldn't take my eyes off the page until i finished the chapter. I enjoying reading about how harry and draco are getting closer and closer together even though they don't want to. Im wondering how much of their feelings and progress in the relationship are influenced from the rings?
Well, Im excited to read what will happen in the next chapter; specifically what narcissa will do to lucius. thanks for the quick and lengthy updates!

I'm with Harry on this one. Poking a maddened snake isn't smart. Stil, are we sure there isn't something wrong with Luc? Why iss he so desperate? Its like he really does need his head read.

About #12...

Damn..am I missing something are you updating
every two days???? There's no way I can be this
far behind. O_O

ANYway, after reading this chapter, all I can
say is...WEEEEEE!!! *with much fanfare!!!* :-D

That was some exciting s***!!!! :-)
I can't believe Lucius would be THAT stupid. What
was he trying to prove? But, at least he, indirectly,
pushed Harry & Draco closer together....hell it's going
to be hard getting that bond dissolved now.

Oh, by the way, it hit while reading the last chapter, I
do believe Ginny needs to DIE! But, that's being to harsh.
So, how about this...the boys marry other partners, BUT
remain married themselves.

No, that wouldn't work, that would be bigamy. So, we go back
to killing Ginny & throwing Astoria down a well, hopefully
with a dead girl at the bottom. :-)

Alright, so I've been eyeing this story for a while now and finally decided to give in and read it.

It's fabulous! It's very well written and the storyline is keeping me on the edge of my seat. It's also nice that you're taking the time to develop Draco's and Harry's characters as well as their relationships. I can't wait to read more.

I'm just hoping that you're the type of author who finishes their stories!

so, I'm gathering everytime Harry does something overtly protective or supportive of his husband we get new metal in the ring? Does it work with draco to? As for Luc sheesh, the way he's acting are they sure he's all there mentally. Why is he so desperate... he's gone from childish to slightly deranged. Like he needs his head read.

This sentence confused me. "like a marble door poised on hydraulic pistons." Draco deals with muggles in this story, does he know about mechanical stuff like that? Or was I not to think of this as a car metaphor?

I do so love the fics you write where the get along a bit more quickly. Great stuff.