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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter maybe Draco has feelings for Harry so he decided to go talk to I'll wait the next chapter.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay :) yes there is some now, haha sort of ;)
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, this is MOST satisfying. I really like the way you use language in your stories.
This business about conceiving children outside of the marriage bond is quite interesting. My mind is whirling with possibilities and questions.
This business about conceiving children outside of the marriage bond is quite interesting. My mind is whirling with possibilities and questions.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
but 'What about Love?' I can hear that song playing in the background.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Does that mean Harry could have some Potter heirs too? Nicely managed idea though, sort of a magical surrogacy.
Can't say as i blame Narcissa on choosing Harry too, at least they know where they stand with him. A nice lack of head games. Now all tey gotta do is bring Harry around... have fun with that Draco mwahaha.
I liked Draco's point on his fathers curtailing of his knowledge. It's an important point to reach.
Can't say as i blame Narcissa on choosing Harry too, at least they know where they stand with him. A nice lack of head games. Now all tey gotta do is bring Harry around... have fun with that Draco mwahaha.
I liked Draco's point on his fathers curtailing of his knowledge. It's an important point to reach.
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter^^
(I thought it would be best to say the important things first)
Although it was a quiet chapter, it made me feel as if the story was gathering momentum. That they both start to think about the other and what he wants is a good sign. And I really have to applaud Narcissa for the way she was handling her husband. Although I still don't really know why steel would be so important in the rings, it certainly seemed to have shaken Lucius. I think she has a lot more influence on him than Draco realizes. But why didn't she use it sooner? Perhaps she wasn't sarcastic when she said that she tinks Harry a better partner for Draco than Astoria...
And the dialogue with Astoria was just brilliant! Draco really starts to loosen up. He isn't the iceberg he pretended to be at the beginning and he also isn't searching for one, eighter. By the way, one sentence really had me thinking of Shakespeare^^ "I sought a partnership, and you showed me a harness." That was just a beautiful metaphor and I don't think I'll forget that one any time soon! Simply brilliant!
(I thought it would be best to say the important things first)
Although it was a quiet chapter, it made me feel as if the story was gathering momentum. That they both start to think about the other and what he wants is a good sign. And I really have to applaud Narcissa for the way she was handling her husband. Although I still don't really know why steel would be so important in the rings, it certainly seemed to have shaken Lucius. I think she has a lot more influence on him than Draco realizes. But why didn't she use it sooner? Perhaps she wasn't sarcastic when she said that she tinks Harry a better partner for Draco than Astoria...
And the dialogue with Astoria was just brilliant! Draco really starts to loosen up. He isn't the iceberg he pretended to be at the beginning and he also isn't searching for one, eighter. By the way, one sentence really had me thinking of Shakespeare^^ "I sought a partnership, and you showed me a harness." That was just a beautiful metaphor and I don't think I'll forget that one any time soon! Simply brilliant!
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, 1 potential spouce down, 1 to go. Draco seems slightly less in denial than Harry, though only slightly. The list in Draco's hand, a potential spouse list?
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco turned out that the bride was not what I wanted and Harry is happy because he wants to marry and have family Giny good chapter.
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
After catching up for so many lost chapters, now I start wondering...'when' do they change their mind on this bond...it is really a start of serious matter if you compare Harry/Draco with Astoria/Ginny, what you see in them, what you do not see in the other and then you try to defend for the differences, lastly you also let that affect you much...it means you care or like about the other enough...
Would Draco start courting Harry seriously after his thinking? Would Lucius dissolve the bond after finding out the appearance of steel if he really cares the name of Malfoy so much? Will the bond force Harry to spend more time with the Malfoys? And what will happen if...the bond finally dissolves?
Would Draco start courting Harry seriously after his thinking? Would Lucius dissolve the bond after finding out the appearance of steel if he really cares the name of Malfoy so much? Will the bond force Harry to spend more time with the Malfoys? And what will happen if...the bond finally dissolves?
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
1. Yaaay Draco!!! That's right tell that skinny arse skank
to take her bags and DON'T let the door hit you on the
way out...even if he WASN'T at his home when he told her
off, the Malfoy way. :-p
2. Damn, Narcissa really did make Lucius feel like he
was related to the gnomes by the time she was through with
him. I wonder how he feels now...at two feet tall! :-D
3. Now, do something with Idiot Ron, who REALLY is a
kill-joy for existing at this point.
1. Yaaay Draco!!! That's right tell that skinny arse skank
to take her bags and DON'T let the door hit you on the
way out...even if he WASN'T at his home when he told her
off, the Malfoy way. :-p
2. Damn, Narcissa really did make Lucius feel like he
was related to the gnomes by the time she was through with
him. I wonder how he feels now...at two feet tall! :-D
3. Now, do something with Idiot Ron, who REALLY is a
kill-joy for existing at this point.