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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe I think that wedding was definitely unique. very cute
person SP777
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about the end...

This was wonderfully done!

I swear the 'Bonded' theme never gets old, as
long as there is some type of twist in it. Maybe
in the far future you'll expand on it, put a lil'
telepathy in it or something.

Anyway, good job. :-)
person magentah
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Goodness those boys are sweet to each other. :) It is lovely. I love seeing Narcissa and Harry growing closer! And despite knowing it might mean trouble, I'm looking forward to seeing Laura make another appearance. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for keeping up with so many stories at once.
person NightLo
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Obviously they are on the straight road to happiness now, just hope they will not be pressurized from all the preparation for weddings (except the ritual, that's different), we do know how troublesome they can be...
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhh POOH! *pouts and crosses arms. The Dursleys always get off scot free or pretty close to iit in your stories. Damn Harry's tender sensibilities. just once I'd love to see a little Dursley roasting... even if they didn't end up crispy critter, just golden brown. :\
harry sounds like he doesn't overly mind Cissa's manipulations and if Luc is present I hope he behaves at the bonding. ^^
person kit
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
their relationship is so sweet. I keep expecting something to pop up and ruin it V__V what if lucius overheard harry explaining about his past and somehow gets the dursleys to the marriage ceremony?!! well, whatever happens.....I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay...since LJ is acting up....I decided to just review here (well that and I was in my acct here and decided to see what was new in the H/D category haha)

DOUBLE REVIEW!! 47'/48ish (at least the 7/8 part...37 Yeah, that's it...

As usual, bedtime story! I'm getting better though, it isn't 2 am!! woohoo!! Just 1. WOW! I loved the burning of the beast. I love the cobalt ring. I still wanna see the ring.

What is Lucius up to? Okay, so he is asking for forgiveness...I get it, but I may end up questioning his every move - especially after the whole trying to take Draco's heart out and everything.

I love that Hermione/Ron/Draco are acting practically normal. You can sense their "normal" tension, but you can see that they are going to be able to work with it. Harry might want to sit and talk to Narcissa about some good spells that might teach everyone some manners or something along those lines.

The Dursley's are still unfinished business. You know I'm still dying to see what Narcissa plans on doing to them...if nothing else, moving them onto the family land, you know...being the last of Harry's family and all, and letting them see how he lives while they get a "home" of their own kind of a pool house, only not quite so nice...and no pool boy for them!

Yeah, I'm a bit tired, so strangeness comes out. I love the update! Simply awesome!! You are awesome!!

love you!

cyn aka cyn_ful
person Payge
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, you've done an awesome job of evolving their relationship from enemies to lovers.
The characterization is awesome, does feel like how Harry would be under a marriage such as this.

Thanks for writing!
person SP777
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #48...

1. Yeah, that
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 48:

"Yeah, that's the smile I want to see for the rest of my life." Awww... *melts*