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Finally, Draco gets a taste of his own medicine. I can't wait to see where this leads!

Great Chapter. This story has been great from the start. Of course your story's always are.

In-ter-es-ting. Will Harry ever get to the point where he's comfortable enough to unburden about his past to Narcissa? I think he'd have to make a LOT of progress before he's up for that.
I'm sort of ambivalent about the ritual to dissolve the marriage bond. On one hand I'd like harry andd draco to be able to explore any feelings they have for eachother with out the push of the bond, but on the other, would Harry stay without it?
They still have a lot of leaarning about eachother to do.

Wow, I just absolutely love this story! I find Harry and Draco are taking their friendship/now relationship at just the right pace to be very realistic. The raw emotion of kinship, fear and longing really grab me as a reader and I feel connected to the story.

I must say, this story is one of my top favs of yours by far.

Please update soon, I'm pretty much hooked :)

I like your story a lot, bt you need to know that there is too little contact between them(of physical kind).And taking things slow for the plot is great but taking it real life(time) slow is frustrating the same way you have to wait for ppl to make up their mind in real life.
So,I hope something will happen in next chapter(at least a touch on the cheek).
Feelings do not occur without some body contact, that is they do not deepen into sexual action.
Sex isn't always related with emotion of love so I'm worried how will it ever occur when them two haven't touched in like 5 chapters.


Anyways, I hope you wont peg me as an impatient nag complaining over nothing.
I probably wouldn't even writting this if a certain lj writer of slash fiction didn't push all my wrong buttons two weeks ago with her whacko attitude towards reviewers who don't stuck their heads into her arse(and she has so many fans 'of that kind'LoL

You're story is one of my fav from this fandom(so far) but I gotta say what I felt when I reached the end of your last chapter.
Kiss,c'mon.Just one:)))

Man. Harry is pretty rude in this, he seems to have a big issue in just saying anything to Draco that he'd probably re-think saying to anyone else. Actually he's getting on my nerves a bit. Harry really doesn't seem like the effort. I think I prefer the Harry in your stories where he's actively seeking a relationship, he's generally far less insecure. I really don't see how they'll actually progress into a happy relationship.

about #28...

THAT was considered a 'date'??? *sigh* Men...

Please tell me the next place they go is a peaceful setting, with
nice scenery & a place to see the sunset...somewhat.

Yes, I am a romantic...and damn proud!

..oh, and I really do enjoy the moments
between Harry & N-a-r-c-i-s-s-a. Now, if
only Harry would stop being an ass around
her.

I know your writing enough to know this isn't the part where everything is smooth sailing and Draco drops Laura and Harry falls in love and then they find/adopt/surrogate/mpreg some babies and life is grand forever. I'm glad that doesn't happen. But I kind of wish it would happen! Ah, the effects of well-written drawn out suspense. :) I am SO glad that Draco has some new perspective. Hopefully Harry will get some eye opening food for thought as well. Eagerly looking forward to their 'dates' just about as much as I am eagerly hoping that they get nowhere with the spell (or, better yet, have it fizzle with no awful side effects). I'm sure that won't happen, and I'll end up loving it all the more. Thanks for dedicating so much of your time to this story! <3

about #27...

Daaamn Harry! Relentless is a word you know NOTHING of! O_o
But, I see his POV AND I got the feeling that he feels more
for Draco than what he wants to AND he would be the spouse
Draco wants him to be, though there IS that pesky problem
of 'what to do about children'.

Good LAWD Draco! Use that Slytherin brain of yours and THINK!
Give him what he wants and you WILL have Harry. You'll just
have to work at it..and courting really is the answer. Because
Harry is used to pursuing and not being pursued.

Draco needs to REALLY see holding onto Harry is like holding
onto a bird in a gilded cage and Harry needs to see the marriage
bond has nothing to do with feelings, though it connects both
spouses so they'll know what is happening to one another in a
'physical' sense.

Right?