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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

person little_nite_owl
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So... does Harry actually have any strong feelings about Draco right now? It almost seems as if he really is totally indifferent to Draco after the last couple of chapters, despite the earlier kiss and conversations, and is really getting into Ian. I know Draco is being stubborn, but his personal feelings are for Harry, whereas Harry's personal feelings are for... who? Draco? Ian? Both, in a confused mess?
person polka dot
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Harry is acting badly. He has a right to date someone if Draco isn't going to be exclusive in the relationship and he shouldn't have to be happy with a family forced on him. Even if he can find peace with them, he'll always be resentful since he didn't get to choose his own path.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think i like Laur. she might be pure business but she knows fire when she sees it. I think I'll almosst be disappointed if/when it doesn't work out.
i wonder how Draco is going to cope with the jealousy. he didn't get to play hero this time and the whole 'Harry with someoen else' is just eating him up inside. i think it'll take an almight smack of the head before he can even begin to see why Harry has a right to be jealouse too.
As for Cissa, I hope she keeps it up. Harry needs some ppl who genuinely care.
woah, tenticles out of the eyes. *shudders. creep factor plus! Can't wait to see who's responsible for these and why.
person NightLo
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I don't understand why would Harry feel hurt? Does he feel hurt because he sees no hope with Draco, so he is sad as he could not have Narcissa as his mother? Or does he feel hurt because he feels not accepted into the Malfoys? Does he feel hurt that once he knows and understands more about Narcissa and Draco, and he sees no hope in it, it hurts him to know this truth? Or does he feel hurt that even Narcissa accepts that personal feeling is more important than family traditions, while Draco does not? Hope I can find out the answer sooner.
person polka dot
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is not trustworthy, she's got something up her sleeve, or maybe she's a super bored house wife.
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 31:

Aww! Narcissa! That last scene was really sweet. I hope Narcissa and Draco have a similar talk sometime in the near future because I think she could help him sort himself out.
person Sam
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. It seems as though you have a lot of time to write, and I envy you that. The characters are very well developed, and the story leaves me wanting to know what happens next. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love Narcissa in this story. She seems to take on many motherly qualities.
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, having someone who genuinely cares must be a quite a shock to Harry's system. I get Harry's point on to much choice though. I prefer simplicity too. Just out of curiosity, what DOES happen to left over food?
Draco's jealousy is soooo lol. Very much I wanna have my cake and eat it too.
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Cliffie after cliffie! I just really want to read what happens next! Amazing, this story just gets deeper and deeper, with more complex emotions. And the question of Lucius' interference...what does that mean? And Harry dating? Lo, you have me on my toes.