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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #33...
Well, now they both came through that subtle
'confrontation' with little to no bloodshed,
so to speak. Because there is no doubt, there
IS love there between them, even if the words
haven't been spoken yet.
..and you just gotta love Draco's posturing
towards Ian & challenge of his status when it
comes to Harry.
It's good that Harry realizes he CAN confront
the beast, without being reduced into a frightened
child.
Well, now they both came through that subtle
'confrontation' with little to no bloodshed,
so to speak. Because there is no doubt, there
IS love there between them, even if the words
haven't been spoken yet.
..and you just gotta love Draco's posturing
towards Ian & challenge of his status when it
comes to Harry.
It's good that Harry realizes he CAN confront
the beast, without being reduced into a frightened
child.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would think Ian would not want to be second fiddle to Draco and be pissed about the kiss.
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry turned to Draco and his tactics that do not understand or rather Harry're like me I have no idea of the rules of pure blood and this girl Laura if he's smart as to study the movements that Draco and in this chapter Harry wanted to know I love your story
sorry for my bad spelling.
sorry for my bad spelling.
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I am imagining things, yet I found Ian being untrustworthy! Jacobs forget things, and Ian goes and catches Harry...he is calm and appears knowing what is happening, instead of being frightened by the beast...he knows a spell that has functioned in the past, and still we haven't caught the wizard/witch responsible for decaying MOM's ward. He is a pureblood and knows the tactics used by Narcissa and spreads the right word. And we still don't know why the decay wizards and witch caught Draco for...all these make me very very paranoid!
Or I just hate that Harry's saviour is not Draco...
Or I just hate that Harry's saviour is not Draco...
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
1. ever since a bunch of kids got sick from Crup shit last year
-okay, call me twisted, but I found that comment sorta funny. Crup shit??
2. Ron & Ian and Harry...must admit Ron has some restraint, because I
would have been all kinds of 'WTF!!' & 'WTH??'
3. Oh, but the fireworks have started haven't they? At least from Draco's side, I'm
surprised he wasn't trying to burn Ian with his eyes..'Die mother'effer..DIE!' and
Laura is just enjoying it from the sidelines..with popcorn. Then again, I would have
been right there with her.
Maybe with the confrontation with each others insignificant partners, Harry & Draco
will come to their sensing a little bit more.
-okay, call me twisted, but I found that comment sorta funny. Crup shit??
2. Ron & Ian and Harry...must admit Ron has some restraint, because I
would have been all kinds of 'WTF!!' & 'WTH??'
3. Oh, but the fireworks have started haven't they? At least from Draco's side, I'm
surprised he wasn't trying to burn Ian with his eyes..'Die mother'effer..DIE!' and
Laura is just enjoying it from the sidelines..with popcorn. Then again, I would have
been right there with her.
Maybe with the confrontation with each others insignificant partners, Harry & Draco
will come to their sensing a little bit more.
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I meant 'come to their senses more'
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm beginning to appreciate Laura more; until now she has only irritated me, but I suppose that was bound to happen when I'm cheering so hard for Draco and Harry to fall in wuv. ;) (I hope you caught the sarcasm there!) I rather expect her to go and do something stupid now, but having said that, I keep predicting you all wrong so I just don't know. Can't wait to keep reading and find out. :)
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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How exciting!! Shelborn seems like a pretty good match with Harry, but it makes me wonder how he was able to come into the interrogation room before someone loss more then their arm. Was he watching from a two-way mirror? I'm probably just being oversuspicious.
It seems unfair that Draco is getting jealous over Harry's relationship with his boyfriend when he is doing the same thing. I wonder if its because he actually craves that connection with Harry or because he is just very possessive of anything that belongs to him. Either way.....it sounds like he's gonna try and sabotage harry's relationship with shelborn....which doesn't sound like it'll turn out too well.
Anyways....can't wait for the next chapter. should be just as interesting.
It seems unfair that Draco is getting jealous over Harry's relationship with his boyfriend when he is doing the same thing. I wonder if its because he actually craves that connection with Harry or because he is just very possessive of anything that belongs to him. Either way.....it sounds like he's gonna try and sabotage harry's relationship with shelborn....which doesn't sound like it'll turn out too well.
Anyways....can't wait for the next chapter. should be just as interesting.
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June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 32:
Ooo! I do really enjoy Laura now! She's even more sensible about these things than Draco, haha! I can't wait to see what this foursome gets up to in the next chapter! Jealous Draco makes me extremely amused, too.
Ooo! I do really enjoy Laura now! She's even more sensible about these things than Draco, haha! I can't wait to see what this foursome gets up to in the next chapter! Jealous Draco makes me extremely amused, too.
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June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When are Harry and Draco gonna open their eyes and see that they love each other?