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for The Marriage of True Minds

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
tch of course she's gone. Whoever's behind this ain't slow, that's for sure.

I wonder what Luc is plotting now. He seems a bit non entity atm.

Oh, oh, Pansy, sweety, you REALLLLLY shouldn't've done that. THIS is going to hurt... I look forward to it.
Mwha ahaha ha.
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
About Ch 34:

Hmm... I'm actually rather grateful for Pansy in this chapter. I'd completely forgotten about her but this situation gives me some interesting thoughts. Harry and Draco haven't really had a run in with the press yet but it is always something that would affect their relationship eventually. That Pansy has made sure their first real battle with the Prophet will be over something so personal will not only show to two of them that they can trust each other but also give them something to fight against together. I'm looking forward to some funny paper headlines in the next chapter as well as some Malfoy brand justice.
person Althydia
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
But I thought the children issue wasn't really an issue since they had other means to have children than sleeping with someone else? Or is it still an issue because Harry and Draco haven't really talked about these other possibilities yet? Maybe they should if their feelings for each other grow stronger.
Now both of them seem conflicted about the bond because they both seem to want the other to stay. They even seem to have put aside the ritual for now (or is it only wishful thinking?). And would the bond really break if Lucius wanted to, now that it has become so strong? Still, I wonder what Lucius's real intentions are... But I loved how Draco looked in awe of Harry for standing up to him! And I loved Harry for doing so and feeling protective of his marriage. Although really, compared to the beast Lucius must not look like much of a threat to Harry...
Also, since Laura seems like a strong and independent woman who could have lots of choices for a potential husband, I wonder if she'll continue the courtship if she realises that Harry and Draco are falling harder for each other. Even though it would be a marriage of convenience, would her pride allow her to be such a third wheel in the relationship? Particularly if Draco continues to pay more attention to Harry than her. Unless she wants Draco to realise that by himself and she's merely indulging his whims at the moment?
Finally, was Pansy's 'gift' just because she's jealous Draco didn't marry her? Seems quite petty and dangerous, considering she's dealing with the Malfoys and Harry Potter...
person Althydia
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
But I thought the children issue wasn't really an issue since they had other means to have children than sleeping with someone else? Or is it still an issue because Harry and Draco haven't really talked about these other possibilities yet? Maybe they should if their feelings for each other grow stronger.
Now both of them seem conflicted about the bond because they both seem to want the other to stay. They even seem to have put aside the ritual for now (or is it only wishful thinking?). And would the bond really break if Lucius wanted to, now that it has become so strong? Still, I wonder what Lucius's real intentions are... But I loved how Draco looked in awe of Harry for standing up to him! And I loved Harry for doing so and feeling protective of his marriage. Although really, compared to the beast Lucius must not look like much of a threat to Harry...
Also, since Laura seems like a strong and independent woman who could have lots of choices for a potential husband, I wonder if she'll continue the courtship if she realises that Harry and Draco are falling harder for each other. Even though it would be a marriage of convenience, would her pride allow her to be such a third wheel in the relationship? Particularly if Draco continues to pay more attention to Harry than her. Unless she wants Draco to realise that by himself and she's merely indulging his whims at the moment?
Finally, was Pansy's 'gift' just because she's jealous Draco didn't marry her? Seems quite petty and dangerous, considering she's dealing with the Malfoys and Harry Potter...
person polka dot
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
?are pansy and draco not friends in this AU?
person NightLo
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...finally a strong competition makes Draco realize what is more important! I feel so happy for Harry~~~~ BTW, would Draco change the terms of courtship as it seems less necessary? Or would he discuss with Harry other possibilities of having children? BTW, I still hold some prejudice over Ian, hope I will find out my answer soon...

Oh~~~ any appearance of Lucius soon?
person Althydia
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Draco has finally offered to end the courtship! Go jealous Draco (and I totally understand that Harry would want to savour the moment)! Although at the moment they still have their agreement about dating/courting, but I'm not giving up hope on that front (because ultimately I'd like them to have a true relationship with only each other). There's also the problem of the ritual that is still going on (I guess they haven't given up on doing it, right?). But I loved their shared passion and the fact that Harry always wished Draco was with him and he acknowledged that he couldn't have the same relationship with Ian as with Draco. Now I hope Draco will stay focused on Harry and lose interest in courting someone else...
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! Harry is taking his power back! And he and Draco have come to another understanding. (hehe kiiisses) AND the case has a lead! You luv us.
...And I still like Laura (crosses arms and pouts.)
I know this is a Drarry but i wish she'd have more of a use in the end. She really has her head screwed on right... and she;s kinda fun. ^^
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bwhahahaha. 'No one can rescue MY Harry but ME.' Possesive much Draco Kuuuuuuuuuuuuuun
I liked the persons comment on Laura taking in the show, munching pop corn on the side. It so suits her and toasting Harry... Just classic. :D
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well well, is crazy both Harry and Draco, they have feelings for each other but are fools maybe I'm wrong but I think they could be accepted as they are happy and good if you want kids to pay to have a muggle surrogate and so have their babies.

jejeej if it is I'm crazy.