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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely Luna characterization! I do enjoy your ideas quite a bit, though if you don't mind you may want to clarify who is speaking when. It can get confusing to see the dialog go back and forth and lose track of who is saying what. Just as a friendly suggestion to make your cool fic even better!
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is an awesome story so far, the plot build up is fantastic, kinda like the whole vulnerable draco and the confident Hermione. Can't wait for more, keep up the good work :D
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have so far. I love how you characterized Luna. You have her spot on. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning and I look forward to more. I love love love your use of Luna!! Thank you, HG4eva