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for Atonement

by absumoaevum

schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for another wonderful chapter! I have one question though....do you think Hermione needs to be so distrusting of Draco? What I'm getting at is Hermione always seems so compassionate and forgiving of others that I figures that she would be a little more understanding to what he's going through. Anyway, great story and I'm definitely looking forward to another chapter!
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must go to bed, so I will keep this short, but I love your Luna, your frustrated Hermione, pensive Ginny, and new-Draco. His gift and her acceptance were simply beautiful! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the way you are writing Luna and can't wait to read MORE!!!
person Mikka
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great! I loved the new chapters. I have to admit I was as much in shock as the characters, when Malfoy changed houses to Hufflepuff. As was said before, your Luna is great and it feels right that she should be the first to openly forgive Malfoy. Thumbs up for Myrtle's appearance in the prefect's bathroom. Keep up the good work! :)
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a great 2 chapters. They were very thought-provoking and I loved that you have an Hermione who is not instantly forgiving and trusting. Thank you and I look forward to more! HG4eva
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like this story but ginny is a real bitch!
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Thank you for a fast new chapter! And, I must say, I think I am in as much shock as the rest of the school. Even knowing what was happening, I can't quite wrap my head around it. lol Looking forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, alright! Did NOT see that coming. lol I look forward to more of this and seeing the Huffs prove their loyalty and forgiveness! Thank you! HG4eva
person Mikka
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style is fantastic, your chapters are well organized and the story flow is captivating. It's like an extension to the Deathly Hallows, completely disregarding the (imo) awful epilogue. I like what you've shown so far. I like it very much indeed. I wanted to say "keep the updates coming" but instead I'll say take your time writing another amazing chapter. You've earned yourself another fan and I'll patiently wait for the next update. Oh, by the way, I loved the idea for the new sorting hat as well as the song. Great job! :)
person Ataraxia
schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far; I hope that month between updates means a new one is coming soon!