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by absumoaevum

person A Mere Reader
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far! Please update it soon!
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the Draco in this fic. When he was with Hermione, he was just so sweet and even with caution. The way they were to each other were intimate and romantic, they just hvnt realized.
person Alice
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dam :-\ that ending actually made me cry.....[silent reader :)]
person Sandra
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful! I cannot wait for you to update. I have read many Hermione/Draco fan fiction in search for the ones that really stand out. This one does! It's very well written, with little to no grammatical errors (I'm a bit picky when it comes to that, quite honestly hehe). Keep up the great work and I hope to see the next few chapters up soon!

~Sandy~
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo!!! cant wait for the next chapter
person Mikka
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter, it was well worth the wait! I didn't comment on the last one because I was a bit confused about the part Astoria is playing here. I loved the scene with Draco's pledge to Voldemort, the words sounded really wicked. Narcissa let out a sob in front of the dark lord. Wouldn't that make him angry? After all, she should rejoice that her son was joining the Death Eaters... Just a thought. As for Hermione abandoning her parents, I really felt for her and hope she won't give up and keep searching for them. Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Well, I LOVE it! Until the next update~
person ginzo
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter by you :D, this just keeps on getting better loll. I just hope that the muggle woman that Draco had let die wasn't hermione's mother lol cuz tht would be a lot of angst to get through after lolll. I love how you incorporate shakespeare in the story lol it is very amusing at times especially towards the end when you used Prescott's words loll. Awesome chapter can't wait for the next update :D.
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww yay!!!!!!!!!! The break through! I can see why you were so excited about this chapter. :-) I know they have a long way to go, and they each have serious demons to fight, but they are a huge step closer to fighting them together. Each will help the other get stronger and support each other in their individual battles. I hope and pray (but don't hold out much hope) Hermione's aren't stifled by Harry and Ron and that they prove to be true friends and not judgmental jerks, like Ginny is being. It is amazing to me that none of them see how completely their prejudices are stopping people from moving on with life and trying to heal. I am glad they will both have Luna and the Huffs. As a Hufflepuff, I am so very proud of (most of) my house! Thank you for this lovely story and I eagerly await more, HG4eva
person Ah...Draco
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! I'm so happy you brought the story back to Dramoine and deepened their connection. I can't wait to see what's next!! PS - the last line was AWESOME
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting...