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for Atonement

by absumoaevum

person DB1
schedule April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@24 I love this story. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!!

DB
person zerah561
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. This. Story. honestly, so well written the ups and downs...cried so much and can't stop reading it and wouldn't you know it? I finally caught up! please post the next chapter soon! The two of them are so smart and it's just such a wonderful thing to see them be so stupid when it comes to understanding new feelings for each other but dammit one of them has got to figure it out! And someone needs to slap that Greengrass girl, I would happily do it. hehe
person ak
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love, Love, LOVE this story!
person Ella
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I have read a lot of draco/hermione stories and your story has a lot of depth that I appreciate and enjoy. I check it everyday to see if a new chapter is up. I support you.
person Audrey
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great work! I am really enjoying the story
person Mikka
schedule March 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I did miss you! :D Thank you for the update!

Did Rory tell Draco she has feelings for him? There's a two week gap without telling us if he's aware of his fan (I know it's not essential to the story, but I'm curious about these little details). I also hope James and Carolyn be honest about their feelings in future chapters. I grew quite fond of your secondary characters and I wish they all have a happy ending.

As for Astoria, I suppose she has to be hateful for the plot to develop, but I hope things don't turn too nasty on Draco. The boy has enough on his plate already.

I love this story! I can't say this enough times. Keep up the excellent work!
person Ah...Draco
schedule March 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated this story, I've been checking very day lol. I absolutely hate Astoria but it will make it so much better when she hopefully gets what's coming to her. I love Draco and Hermoine getting to know each other on a deeper level, trusting each other more and realizing how much they have in common.

Please, please keep writing and update soon!!
person colao
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww, they're so cute and Astoria is sooo nasty
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK, so Astoria is a bitch and has something up her sleeve. Draco doesn't want to go back to his old self and Hermione is confused. Whew! That was definitely worth the wait! I am so looking forward to reading the next chapter to see what happens between Hermione, Draco and Astoria the bitch.
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, welcome back! I was very glad to see you were updating again. :-) I want to see them whole, happy, and mentally healthy. Plus, I need to see Astoria taken down! Thank you for the update, HG4eva