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I started reading this story a day ago and now finally caught up with it. That's the one thing I hate about fanfics: waiting for the author to write more, especially if it's such a good story as this one. I really like how you managed to come up with a great storyline that's not lemon-driven and fits very well into the canon, while also implementing your own elements. In the author's notes you complained a couple of times about having to write conversations, but I think you're doing a great job at it thus far! Heck, I think you're one of very few American authors (judging by the American spelling) who succeeded in making the conversations sound British, with English slang.

Keep up the great work, I'm really looking forward to more of this!

So glad to read the new chappie! Love the interaction between the 3. Very sweet. Harry is messed up but I feel better about his chances of making it out of this now.

I love this story soooo much. I love the originality of it, and that its not just hearts and rainbows. And I love your Ron.

Another amazing chapter!!! I check every day waiting for new ones and am not dissapointed! I love the growing interaction between the three. Harry is finally giving in to whats good for him. :). It was perfect between him and heromine. They are all developing a bond that is very strong. I absotuly loved the side story with Ron cleaning poor dobbys body. And talking to his family. It was good to add that. I can't wait for the next instalments in this amazing story!!! Poor harry has to bury dobby :(. But they sill start to move towards the bank!! Thank you thank you!! I'll continue to check and patiently wait for the next chapter! I want to print this out and keep it it's so good!!!

Patiently waiting for the next chapter!! Not really. I'm dying here!!!!

Well finally they get together! Poor Harry & his many demons. Hopefully Ron & Hermione will pull him out of his pit of despair. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ahhhhhhh yes!!!! I've been waiting for this chapter!! Absolutely loved it. The emotions were so strong and the love between the three of them was exquisite. Thank you thank you for updating!!!! I Check back allllllllllll the time waiting and watching for that next chapter link! I love this story and where you are going with it. It's an A+ read. I can not wait to see what happens next!!!! Please please please keep writing this.

Heartwrenching. I cried and cried and cried ... and felt a little aroused myself, to be honest!

Thank you so much Greycie, you are one amazing writer. Keep up the good work, I'll be there when the next chapters are up!

Oh, and I forgot to add that this is maybe the one scene many people had been waited for, so I guess you felt some sort of pressure writing it, but it was done very tastefully. It was cruel and poignant, yet incredibly tentative and beautiful. You have a very impressive way with words. Well done!

As always an amazing chapter!! I was very excited to find an update!! Thank you thank you thank you!!! I love this story and the way it follows deathly Hallows but at the same time changes small items. Like Harry dissapearing at the end!! Gah! I can not wait to find out what happens next!!!