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for What it comes down to

by melinda1293

person Lou
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here waiting. So excited to read the new chapter whenever you get it out. I hope it's a long one. Ahhhhh!!! Can't wait.
person Lou
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm back! Sorry it took me so long to review this teasing chapter!!! I loved it though it was quite a tease. ;). I think I like how you're sort of pulling them apart for a moment. It can't all be paradise. This is a war. Poor Ron though. He just can't seem to get it right. I want a hair cut by Heromine now after reading that. Gah! I loved that. And of course there is grip hook being a dick. But I think my favorite thing was when Ron got mad and then it said something like he was in a blind rage but came to pinned against the wall by an aggressive Harry. I like go see harry standing up against Ron. I think he normally bullies him to much. But at the end with the ne calling then kiss!! Gah!! Love it! Thank you thank you thank you!!!! I can not wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please write more?!? Ill give you a cookie!!
person peppydog
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I've been following your story from the beginning. I really have enjoyed your writing and hope you continue this story to complishion. That said, I don't like this threesome, it can't be mentally healthy for any of them, but especially Harry after being repeatedly and brutally raped. (Plus, I always wanted Harry and Ginny together.) Please, I have been waiting for years to find out what power Harry has and how he did get them out of the dungeon! What he became, where's Snape etc. I'm not complaining about the sex, really, but I love your plot and development of the other parts of the story more. So please, for a long time reader, tell us more. Thank you, Peppy
person Kimbovet
schedule July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! More insight into the trio's relationship & Griphook's psyche. Every since Harry rescued Ron & Hermione from Malfoy's Mansion originally, I thought he was a phoenix or more likely a phoenix animagus. Now I think that even more.
person Lou
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here. Just an FYI lol. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
person Nicole
schedule June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope hope you still continue....I LOVE this story. Can't wait to deadlier!
person Lou
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just you know dropping an impatient line. Staring at you in your general direction. Tapping fingers on the desk. Chewin the end of my pencil. Waiting. You know I'm impatient but that's part of the fun! :) ill check back later. Maybe I'll go read a few of my more favorite chapters. I'm probably going to cry when this story is over. It gives me something to look forward to. :D
person Lou
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I went back and started to reread from ch 7. I'm on ch 12 now and I still love this story more than any I've ever read. I think the escape from Malloy manor was perfect. I loved the way that Harry was so protective over them espically when Draco showed up. The way he just dissapered with them and then left them in the burrow was so sad. He was so tormented. I like to go back and remember how broken Harry was in the beginning. He really has come very far. He had really almost given up. I'm so glad you decided to finish the story and not stop after he first woke up. Some of my favorite parts are in those later chapters. I also loved how Heromine and Ron finally get together. Poor Ron was so upset. It was a perfect moment for it to happen because they weren't brave enough to do it on their own. Keep it up! I'm waiting very impaltently for the next chapter. Now that Ron and Harry are starting to have a little fun again. It's cute. I'm glad this story is so drawn out though. Gives me something to look forward to. :) love it!!!! Thank you!!!
person Lou
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter!!! I was a little confused in the beginning because of how fast the story was moving. Most of the other chapters were wonderfully drawn out but about mid way I started to understand. I like that you kinda swerved back into the Harry that is unsure of himself and what is going on. It was a bit to happy go lucky there for a moment. Plus showing them finally getting frustrated with what's going on. Poor Harry. Griphook is gettin on my nerves too!!! Gah! Evil goblin. I like that they went home and discused/argued about what to do with him and the sword. The bit in the kitchen was fluer was nice. It's nice to see some other characters every so often. My favorite part was the end. The small fight between the boys was cute. Like how they were before all this happened to them but now they play fight sexually with a poor concerned Heromine standing by. I hope Harry stays with them I love the three of them together. Like I've said before...not sure If you read these reviews...but yours is the first and only trio fic I read. I've tried starting several others but it just doesn't make sense like yours does. You give a beautiful backstory and a ton of information to make it not seem silly that they suddenly all love each other. I will of course be checking back in all the time waiting for more! Sad that its getting to the end but I think I've been reading this for two? Years now. I love it. Thank thank thank you!!!!!!!
person Kimbovet
schedule June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Well worth the wait. Loved Ron & Harry at the end & how much they were bewildering Hermione.