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This is story is really good. Their conversations while working out their mutual trauma is well done and realistic. I'm wondering, though, what's happening in Voldy's camp. Did he kill any others besides Lucius? What's happened to Severus? When will the trio re-start their mission? Not trying to rush you as I prefer a well constructed story, not a rushed one.

I don't know...I can't see Harry reacting to Ginny all that well. They should put the house on lockdown beforehand. I get a sense that he'll lose his shit worse than he did around Hermione. I know if I were Harry, I certainly would.

Wow! You posted two great chapters in a week. How awesome is that!! You are on a serious roll.

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Is it bad that I want Ron to team up with Harry so they can track down and kill all of the torturing rapists on Harry's list? Harry needs his wing man, after all.

And I am really, really curious about that asterisk.

I'm wondering just what kind of fallout there's going to be when Harry realizes that his two best mates are sleeping with each other. I just don't see him handling it all that well. And will he allow Hermione to massage the cramps out of his legs without wigging out on her again? I have to say, Hermione has been so much in the background these past few chapters that I am missing her pov a bit. Will be nice to see what's going on with her.

And with Remus' story of his time with Greyback's pack (it really WAS kind of audacious for DD to expect Lupin to go back into that fray, wasn't it?), I wonder how much Ron and Hermione are piecing together about Harry's experiences. I think back on the bits of dialog they heard from Bellatrix and Avery and if they were cognizant of the implications. They seemed surprised about Harry's story on Snape's visit---and yet they were right there when Bellatrix mentioned him. Do the two of them have conversations about that?

As always, looking forward to more.

poor Remus. Still, it's understanding of Ron about the list.

Once again, well done. You're very thorough with details of what's going on in their heads, whoever's perspective each chapter comes through, and you're taking us with them for this.

The discussion with Remus was beautifully done, and the emotion between them was strong but at the same time subtle. And as always, I love how you draw Ron and Harry's interactions.

If you've written anything else, it wold be wonderful if you'd post links. You're really very good at this. Looking forward to the updates ...

This story just keeps getting better and better! You are doing an amazing job developing the characters. I love the insights into their minds. I'm also a huge sucker for trio bonding moments, and this story is full of them! I curious what the plan is for the relationship between the three. Will it remain Ron/Hermione, or will it become all three of them? Could be an interesting healing process for them I suppose. Anyways, can't wait to read more...great job so far!!!

Greycie,

It's really sweet of you to respond. I don't want to get you in trouble, as I believe the mods here frown upon authors using their review section to reply to readers, but if you ever want to answer any of the questions you get here, know that there is a Forum that includes a board for authors to have that kind of interaction. Otherwise, if you ever want to talk writing, you can always send me a line--natmcd62@msn.com

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