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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was thoroughly and incredibly cathartic.
The integrity of your portrayal of Ron is really something special to me. Not like he's a favorite character normally, but you're so beautifully in his head, and it feels very true to the Ron we all know, the stream-of-Ron-consciousness you're laying out here.
And nothing is rushed, nothing is forced, and the end ... I was wincing just reading it, utterly immersed in Ron's confusion, right there with him.
So well done.
The integrity of your portrayal of Ron is really something special to me. Not like he's a favorite character normally, but you're so beautifully in his head, and it feels very true to the Ron we all know, the stream-of-Ron-consciousness you're laying out here.
And nothing is rushed, nothing is forced, and the end ... I was wincing just reading it, utterly immersed in Ron's confusion, right there with him.
So well done.
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, messed up. Still, i think it's going to take Ron a bitt to adjust (if he does)to that idea.
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I really liked Poppy standing up for herself with Harry and pointing it out that he was actually better afterwards. But then we went into Ron pretty much laying him to him as well. Seems like they decided to really stick it to him that day.
And why are they so insistent they all have to share a single bed? I mean sure they want to be in the room to keep an eye on Harry but they could easily move in another bed from another room. Or conjure a camp bed or move into another room that has more beds or anything. Seems to be slightly contrived drama to me. Even if they were in seperate beds you can still have the 'not supposed to be shagging' clause in there as well.
And why are they so insistent they all have to share a single bed? I mean sure they want to be in the room to keep an eye on Harry but they could easily move in another bed from another room. Or conjure a camp bed or move into another room that has more beds or anything. Seems to be slightly contrived drama to me. Even if they were in seperate beds you can still have the 'not supposed to be shagging' clause in there as well.
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story! once again, an amazing ch
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
An actual, Harry initiating it, hug. He couldn
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story! I can't wait to read more!!!The storyline is excellent! Keep upi the excellent work!!!
P.S. Are Harry and Ginny going to make up after what he said to her?
P.S. Are Harry and Ginny going to make up after what he said to her?
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I love this story. I don't know what made me start reading it because I usually don't like non-con, especially when it's so graphic, but your writing just pulled me in. Your writing is phenomenal and I LOVE your characterizations!! Especially Ron. I'm obsessed with the chapters in Ron's POV (though you do an amazing job no matter whose POV the chapter is in). I feel like Ron always gets such a bad wrap in fanfiction, they always make him out to be a one-dimensional asshole. It's so refreshing to see him as a real character.
I can't wait to see how Hermione sorts out her feelings for Harry and how Ron deals with it. I love the dynamic you've created between the three of them. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
I can't wait to see how Hermione sorts out her feelings for Harry and how Ron deals with it. I love the dynamic you've created between the three of them. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Did I just catch you after you posted again? I mean, I just got home, lol, and there it was.
Well, that was a whole lot of sleeping in this chapter. I wondered what was going on with Ron and Hermione while Harry was out all this time, but perhaps we'll find out next chapter?
You made cunnilingus sound horrific, btw. It's not easy to make a rape by a woman sound so horrendously awful, but you sure managed to accomplish it. I'm glad that Harry was comforted by Hermione, but you had me guessing there, what was going to happen with that potion Madam Pomfrey gave him still in Harry's system. I guess his nightmare cured him of any lingering boners.
Very curious to hear Ron's take on it.
Well, that was a whole lot of sleeping in this chapter. I wondered what was going on with Ron and Hermione while Harry was out all this time, but perhaps we'll find out next chapter?
You made cunnilingus sound horrific, btw. It's not easy to make a rape by a woman sound so horrendously awful, but you sure managed to accomplish it. I'm glad that Harry was comforted by Hermione, but you had me guessing there, what was going to happen with that potion Madam Pomfrey gave him still in Harry's system. I guess his nightmare cured him of any lingering boners.
Very curious to hear Ron's take on it.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh Harry. 1 step forwars, 3 steps back.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just found this and have spent the entire afternoon reading the whole thing. This is an EXCELLENT story and I can't wait to read the rest of it!