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Whoa. Go Ron.

The sleepwalking was inspired. You set a really creepy tone out of nowhere and now I'm wondering just how severe Harry's PTSD is going to get. I can't imagine that Bella's able to use Legilimency on him, so I'm guessing he really is just having some serious flashbacks.

Eager to see what's going through Harry's mind right about now.

Simply astounding, I love the pace and build up of the story, and truly believe that had there been an 8th book, this would be in it. I have never read a story where an author was so dedicated to the complicated healing process a victim goes through, and I am utterly enthralled and cannot wait to read another chapter.

OMG I am hooked on this story! it is one of the most beautifully well written fics I've ever read! More please!!
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This has 2 b the best story I've read cin a long while really amazing

LOVE this fic. I can honestly say that I have never read any other H/Hr/R pairing that seemed even a fraction possible as this one does - and, if not effortlessly, this fic puts an amount of realism into THAT relationship struggle in a way that contributes even more. Congratulations on a continuing fantastic job - I am very excited to read what comes next. I can sympathize with the mourning period, but please keep going! Best of luck to you... oh and PS - HOT as HELL. ;) I like it!

they are coping very well all things considered but I wouldn't be surprised if there was 1 or more suffering psd after all is said and done.
So HOW exactly are they going to get the info they need on the horcruxs?
Also, it's your story, up date as yyou will, though personaly i prefer sooner rather than later. >>

I've been reading fanfic for about 11 years now, Harry Potter mostly, and this fic of yours is one of my favorites, EVER. I canNOT wait to keep reading, I so wish it were finished! lol. I'm so very, very glad you decided to finally share your masterpiece with us :D

This is a nice change of pace though I'm sure you'll mix it up next week by having Harry wolf out or Hermione's head explode or something. ;)

And we may be wondering back into DH proper territory? Given how much extra time they've taken sitting around at the mansion. I wonder how far along LV's got with his stuff, getting the elder wand I mean.

Appreciated the angst break. Not even literally previously tortured teens can be angsty all the time... just 99.5 percent of it. :P
I'm glad they're re establishing their relationship... are 3 somes permitted in thiss potteverse? Occasionally it looks like that's the direction their meandering in from time to time.
It;ll be interesting to see how they handle snatching that horcrux considering Harry's health is still wobbly.

Great little cliffhanger there, and a good way to set up the next chapter. Bring on the next round of angst!


Lol, but concerning your notes I do think this chapter struck the right balance of intimacy between Harry and Hermione, and a shared relief between all three of them. I loved the way Harry was able to tease Ron about his 'horny hands' and I thought Ron's gruff embarrassment, particularly after we realize what kept him up all night, was right on cue. The silliness you allude to was not only needed for our trio, but realistic, especially after their huge blow out the day before. I was also impressed with the conversation between Harry and Hermione while they were still in bed and felt it rung true. Harry's qualms about being able to be with Ginny broke my heart as much as it did Hermione's, but I'm glad he was able to open up to her about it. You're working them closer to a certain ease in sharing these kinds of scary feelings with each other, and making it plausible for Harry to confide in them more and more.

This was a scar she could only hear and not see though, like the ones in his mind that she only heard in their whisperings in the dark or when they hemorrhaged, bleeding out into terrified nightmares

I thought that was a fantastic way to aptly describe Harry's more troubling emotional wounds. Lovely prose.