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for Divided We Fall

by Remarkable

schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I do so like this story so far and hope that you continue.

I would never have imagined Tonks in Severus' bed. But I do like the hair color change during her orgasm...that was brilliant.

And poor Lucius, to have Hermoine show up on his door step!?!?!?!? They will soon be at each other's throats and other body parts soon...I hope *puppy dog eyes to the author*.
person circe266
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Broken, despairing Lucius is a sad, sad image. It is not much of a stretch to see Draco as the spoiled little bastard striking out and turning his devoted mother against Lucius. I hope that Lucius has hit rock bottom with this chapter, and his fortunes start to improve with the next. Well, not too quickly . . . I like a good long story.

And who could be the mysterious female waiting for Snape back at Hogwarts?
person surfmistress
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start and it makes me feel very sorry for Lucius. While I'm not used to Draco being portrayed as a 'true believer', I find it entirely possible he could be. I'm not sure what to make of Narcissa at this point; even if she still loves Lucius, it seems she
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to this new story *hint, hint, hint*

I always love anything with Lucius and Hermoine being hot and sweaty together. Especially if Lucius is bad *or good, depending on your definition*.

I think that Lucius should find Hermoine's ability to 'handle' the finances a major turn on. Then he can 'handle' her in the bedroom where 'letting go' is a major turn on to her.

As always, more...please.