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Amazing. Simply amazing. I always love your stories. Keep up the amazing work!

First off, I wanted to let you know I have been reading fanfics for a very long time. However, since I but only read, I have never created an account and have never reviewed anything on this site. Your story has been so marvelous, yet has so few reviews, that I felt the urge to write one. I hope you continue this story as it is very believable and in character. I have never been so enthralled before with the development of the characters themselves. Trust me when I say I have read a plethora of fanfics and yours is, by far, one of the best and most convincing. You have stayed true to pretty much every character in your story. I truly appreciate your work. I look forward to reading more and hope you update soon. Really..absolutely fantastic.

I'm loving your story so much so far!! It's very well written and the story is addicting. One comment though, on ch5. I'm assuming you are from America because biscuits in America are different to biscuits that you get in the UK which are more like cookies. That's just an assumption, I'm not sure if you meant UK biscuits or not. Other than that, keep writing so I can keep reading!

Allow me to dance with glee because this has been updated! *dance breakdown* Okay, so I absolutely love this and am glad you're continuing it. The pacing is good, the writing is good, the characterization is strong. You haven't fallen into a bucket of tropes and can't get out. I love the faerie plot line, it's really unique. I wonder if he will make an appearance later? The last bit with Draco's jealously of Snape was fantastic. More more more!

I LOVE that ur chapters are soo loong but i still seem to want more lol. Your style of writting is great usually people come up with a good idea for a story but they struggle with the delivery of it but you are doing great in both accounts. For draco to not be OOC is great doesnt mean i like him being an ass but i feel that a gradual change in character is best for someone as volatile as draco. i truly love your writing please keep it up dont give up on this story i could not take it :) waiting anxiously for the next update Thanks

Enjoyed it so far. Cant wait to see how their "relationship" develops.

I am so glad to see this updated! This is extremely well written and totally convincing. Though I have to ask why tai-chi? As a battle field hand to hand combat system it seems like a terrible choice because it's so slow. I would think you would pick something like Krav Maga or Systema which require much faster movement and in addition both train in knife fighting as well as weapon-less combat.

Soo great love the plot of the story i hope u keep up daily updates cause i cant wait to see what happens please update SOON! thanks

I am really sorry, you don't get more reviews. This story is really good and I patiently wait now for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work!