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June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story!
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hah, good ending. Are Ron and Mio still his friends? (he did sorta kinda abandon the wizarding world and all (not that Brolly gave him much choice.)
I'm surprised Harrys body was up for all that. I hope he's in touch with a good healer.
Dumb;es end was a bit of a surprise but really, it couldn't happen to a niceer arse... and this way Harry doesn't technically have to kill anyone. Never saw that one comeing did u you manipulaitve old goat.
One thing though, I was re reading it and in one chappie you used the word gentle and other variations of it to describe things like seven or more times. Normally you're a very good writer but for that instance I felt like handing you a Thasuras and saying use it. As I said, normally, you're writing is really good so please keep an eye on things like that in future fics. Thankyou
I'm surprised Harrys body was up for all that. I hope he's in touch with a good healer.
Dumb;es end was a bit of a surprise but really, it couldn't happen to a niceer arse... and this way Harry doesn't technically have to kill anyone. Never saw that one comeing did u you manipulaitve old goat.
One thing though, I was re reading it and in one chappie you used the word gentle and other variations of it to describe things like seven or more times. Normally you're a very good writer but for that instance I felt like handing you a Thasuras and saying use it. As I said, normally, you're writing is really good so please keep an eye on things like that in future fics. Thankyou
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Things seem to be heating up. Harry seems to be out from Dumbledore's thumb and the z fighters are about to reach an agreement. I wonder what will happen next and who the floating man was. Thanks for updating so quickly.
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh NO! Saiyan rampage time. still I'm surprised Dumbles will tops Harrys. Maybe its cause he took him by surprised.
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June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i hope he tars them apart.
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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i hope they both die painfully.
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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woah, Harry totally told Dumbles to Shove It. w00t. I assume Harry will ask Dobby to bring his stuff later?
As for my earlier questions... woah, easy, i wasn't having a slam at you. They were legit questions. I mean, half the population and more gets wiped, you'd think it would upset the balance of magic and such and when Goku tosses his planet bombs...they draw energy from all nature yeah? So you'd think the magical community would notice the pull on their power (they got more to give. ^^)
There's going to be some serious throw down ish ness going on with Brolly's pop. You can see it. I hope Harry can help him.
At any rate, Voldi's gunna be stoked. Harry totally quit. lol. Once he realises Harry is a Horcrux, he'll be wanting him well guarded... If he can get near him around Brolly. *grins
As for my earlier questions... woah, easy, i wasn't having a slam at you. They were legit questions. I mean, half the population and more gets wiped, you'd think it would upset the balance of magic and such and when Goku tosses his planet bombs...they draw energy from all nature yeah? So you'd think the magical community would notice the pull on their power (they got more to give. ^^)
There's going to be some serious throw down ish ness going on with Brolly's pop. You can see it. I hope Harry can help him.
At any rate, Voldi's gunna be stoked. Harry totally quit. lol. Once he realises Harry is a Horcrux, he'll be wanting him well guarded... If he can get near him around Brolly. *grins
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
at lest he know he is.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
pffft ahahahaha. self proclaimed trouble magnet indeed. Hey, at least he admits it.
Have i meantioned recently how much i love this story.
Hey, is the magical world effected by Shenron snd did Snape survive? Also, considereing the population thinning thst hsppens in the various db serieses, would the magicals attempt to interfere oln the muggules behalf?
For this and more check back when you next update. :P
Have i meantioned recently how much i love this story.
Hey, is the magical world effected by Shenron snd did Snape survive? Also, considereing the population thinning thst hsppens in the various db serieses, would the magicals attempt to interfere oln the muggules behalf?
For this and more check back when you next update. :P
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so amusing. I was surprised and pleased when I saw this chapter up, it was only by chance that I looked in the HP section. So it seems everyone is a lot calmer than they were last chapter- Harry is a good peacekeeper and of course a big trouble magnet. Too bad he got caught before his saiyan friends could be fed. Looking forward to more.