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for Watching Sorrow

by shatteredstar21

person rosey
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
the feels oh the feels i started to cry it was so good
person suezq21643
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for the next exciting chapter of your story please pretty please email me when you update at suezq21643@yahoo.com
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just have one thing to say i cant read and review if you dont update your story!!!!!!!!
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol magical quads huh? you sure aren't taking it easy on harry are you lol. glad to see more of this, keep up the good work :D
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, but I think you could have moved the story along faster. Keep the updates coming. Let me know when the next update is out. thanks
darkest
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I must say that was an interesting twist... sorta expected Harry to outlive his lovers and stumble upon Riddick but to die of rejection... and then to b reborn was a clever trick that now I must continue forth lol...
Mirky
person Mara
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I had saved this story ages ago to read once it was completed. I came across it again today and had forgotten that it was incomplete, so started reading it. I am not sure if I am happy that I read it or not. It is a brilliant story, and wonderfully written. The plot is wonderfully twisted to where you can meld both worlds without losing anything from either one. You did an amazing job with it. And the characterization of everyone is masterful. I love Kadar as well.

But now I am sitting here, practically bouncing in anticipation for a new chapter, but since you updated it just a couple days ago, I know I am going to have to wait a while. I think I just might cry. This is a crossover that has been woefully neglected. I am assuming because people just can't figure out a believable way to meld the two worlds and time frames. You are truly a master of it.
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you have got to continue on with this story. don't just stop there. Please. Even if reviews are lacking know that there are always ppl reading. I myself review when I am at the end of the fic then after that if each chapter brings up something that I want to talk about. ^_^

So keep it going. i must see these quadruplets. though you only mention 3 eggs. Plus... i like to read more about Kedar and how the ppl are going to survive this planet. *giggles* good job.
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This fic causes conflicting emotions in me. One the one hand I absolutely love it and can't wait to devour more and more and more like some type of ravenous hell beast. On the other hand it's fairly dry and jumps around quite a bit which can be a bit confusing...as I said, conflicting emotions. In the end I'll just reread whenever I need to and keep watching for more because I have an unhealthy fascination with HP/PB crosses and just can't get enough. Thank you so much for sharing this!!
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so good :)