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November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
great, will you sequel xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I agree with all the other revewes this story is amazing and really hope u change your mind and make a sequel
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story, it has masses of potential and could well become one of the best stories on this site. Great premise and wonderful balances between charecters. Kudos.
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Atharos
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February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
SEQUIL PLEASE i REALLY LIKED THIS THANK YOU...
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
intresting will he be going back in time to fix it
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that is a neat outlook. I wonder when they ended up and what they did there.
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
is this gonna be a series or a multific? cause I love it. I'd love to read more ^^
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting. I can honestly say I've never seen this kind of twist, though there are plenty of Evil!Dumbledore fics out there where he gives Ginny a love potion for Harry. I loved where this one went though, though there was a bit of jumping from new character to new character. I'm just glad I know the old Gods and could keep up. I don't think there are many, if any stories that personify Magic, much less the Creator. Great story!
I know you said in the summary that this was complete, but is it a prologue by any miraculous chance? You showed Death's perspective amazingly, and Magic's and Creator's, but what about Harry's viewpoint after he's freed from the love potion of Ginny. For example, he suddenly fell out of love and instead of thinking it as some sort of mid-life crisis he immediately files for divorce? Or did he find out something that drove him to it like her lover? Or did his love blind him to the fact that their children looked nothing like either of them? Even if you don't do a full story detailing their return to the past and subsequent life together, (which I would absolutely love!) you should definitely do a follow up piece with Harry's viewpoint.
Also, if you need a beta for anything, feel free to email me: Donnabeth89@hotmail.com
I know you said in the summary that this was complete, but is it a prologue by any miraculous chance? You showed Death's perspective amazingly, and Magic's and Creator's, but what about Harry's viewpoint after he's freed from the love potion of Ginny. For example, he suddenly fell out of love and instead of thinking it as some sort of mid-life crisis he immediately files for divorce? Or did he find out something that drove him to it like her lover? Or did his love blind him to the fact that their children looked nothing like either of them? Even if you don't do a full story detailing their return to the past and subsequent life together, (which I would absolutely love!) you should definitely do a follow up piece with Harry's viewpoint.
Also, if you need a beta for anything, feel free to email me: Donnabeth89@hotmail.com