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by TheLadyMiya

schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I missed an update. How the hell did that happen, LOL? *smh* I was thinking you hadn't updated in a couple of weeks. Well, I'll have to wait until I'm more alert to read, but jeez, this is just sooo weird.
person Glorioux
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am one of your anonymous lurkers at the ffnet who has reviewed twice I think. I am the one who is not pro of torture, rape etc. it is har to be a fan of abuse, pain, etc when you have personally experienced it, or had loved ones do. Nevertheless, I like your writting style and I see the glimpses of a jewel in the writer you are.

I love the world of fairies, JKR made them into morons, oh well. Voldemort is twisted, evil, and adorable. I like how each of the two adversaries are drawing each other into each others turfs in a game of tug and war and delicious romps in the boudoir. It is interesting if somewhat predictable Hermione's willingness to cross into the dark to protect her kin.

person Nerys
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To Manopeluda:

"I am the one who is not pro of torture, rape etc. it is har to be a fan of abuse, pain, etc when you have personally experienced it, or had loved ones do."

*sighs* Seriously? So when an author writes about something, they're automatically a fan of it? You do realise that's the underlying message you're stating here.

And the arrogance of this, the assumption ... You're not the only one on the planet who has experience with torture and rape. Everyone deals with it differently. Some put it away, some shout it off rooftops, some use it as an excuse when they state something negatively in a review and some write fictional stories with those things in them or beta them.

Why did you mention your personal experience when there is something in a story you don't really like? Do you want to make Miya guilty for adding torture and rape in her story? Do you want to say she's a bad person for doing so? She had warnings up. You didn't have to read it if it's too confrontational for you.

However, you did read it and then reviewed.

You could've just said I am not a fan of those kind of scenes, which would've been an equally valid review. I question your motives for adding the rest. It's like you want to take away the author's ability to respond because YOU experienced it. It would be like me saying: Don't mind my rant here, I'm PMS-ing right now (which I am). It's giving an excuse for nasty words in order for the party being attacked to seem like horrible or silly people if they are offended by the words stated.

Well, if you're offended by my words, I won't think you're silly at all. You have a right to be so. Just like I was very offended by that sentence in your review. I don't think Miya took it as badly as I did. She's a nice person, kind and understanding. I, however, am not. I tire of people who think that when an author writes something they must support the action. I tire of people who make the same statements over and over again, even when an author posts a chapter without the actions they so oppose. And I especially get tired of the alleged moral high ground.

Sincerely,

Nerys
person AlasseaM
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW it!
Annoying fairies. This is getting more and more interesting (As if it wasn't interesting to begin with, how stupid are you Alassea?)
Well, forget that. You are wonderful, and this was informative too.
LOL at Tom. "I know. I made you pregnant" Nice observation. I don't even WANT to know what he'd do if it was someone else's.
Aww, and his realization about not wanting to lose his family was so sweet. It is true after all that in a relationship people affect each other, no matter how much they don't want that.
Love your chapter (okaaaay, stop saying that, you know you love all Lady Miya's chapters and stories, and she surely knows that too *hits head on the wall*)
Continue ;)

- Alassea.
person Shamonti
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love reading Voldemorts POV, Althea is right he is way more funnier than Hermione. The line when realises Althea thinks he's the submissive in the relation made LOL so hard I nearlly pee'd myself. :D
person Mari
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh now its on! I love how caring and protective Voldemort gets he and Hermione are an awesome team. Fantastic chapter I love knowing what those evil faeries are up to. I hope they can stop their plan and live in that happy little family. Cant wait to see what happens next! Poor Althea being used like that.
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story!! Thank you for writing and sharing this, it's definitely among my favourites now! Love the idea, your characters, everything! Voldemort surviving and mingling with Hermione's friends and the rest of the Wizarding community without anyone even suspecting him, secretly living his little "domestic" family life with Hermione. LOL just too hilarious, yep domestic life
person Mari
schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great moment between the two of them to just talk. Its funny to see them try and explain themselves to the other. That darned shadow is going to get Althea to try and harm the baby isnt it? No good can come from this.
person Shamonti
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited for the next chapter!
person AlasseaM
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was too short D:
Fantastic chapter! Hot smut LOL :D
Hmm... Althea tried it with her teddy bear? :O