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by TheLadyMiya

person Kate
schedule December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL at the clone!!! I laughed so hard. Funniest chapter ever!
And aawww no threesome xD
-waits for next chapter-
person CeruleanIncubus
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg nooooo. I can't believe you stopped the chapter there! I've been waiting so long... And I've been trying not to become obsessed with this story but it's actually really hard. The less often you update the more obsessed and frantic I get. I seriously check back like every day to see if you have updated lol.
And btw, I'm in love with your Voldemort. Even when he acts like an ass I'm usually on his side more than I am on Hermione's side lol. I'm pretty sure that's a bad thing... Your story is corrupting me!!
Anyway, please update soon! I actually have a bad feeling about the next chapter, like something bad is going to happen to Voldemort. I have to know what happens so please, for the sake of my sanity, write like you've never written before!
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked Althea and the Clone.

I didn't comment on chapter thirty because I felt you 'jumped the shark,' which is the first time I've felt that way about any of your stories. Hermione jumping straight to the conclusion that Ginny might think Marcus was Tom was very OOC for someone who usually weight the options. Hermione (in character) would have tested the waters with Ginny by asking if she had a problem with Marcus. As much as I like the clone, this entire sub-plot is disappointing.
person AlasseaM
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What the hell happened to Althea? She seems so happy all of a sudden. Wait! The fairies are able to be there.. what if Morgana tries something?
Aww, Tom's trying to apologize for his screw up. And his thoughts about the speeches was hilarious. He was like "Love, bla, bla, bla".

person SarahLuvsZombehs
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG VOLDEMORT AND VOLDEMORT ARGUING WITH EACH OTHER OVER HERMIONE. My brain cannot really comprehend anything more than that, besides Voldemort fucking shit up last chapter. But, going back to my original statement. . . Excuse me while I go die from laughter and fantasies


xoxo
Reine
person Shamonti
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haha, love the clone and love the chapter!
person Kate
schedule November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha so funny how the tension starts to build up in the middle of the chapter and little Althea goes
person AlasseaM
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I found the beginning of the chapter hilarious. For no reason actually. Probably because it reminded me of some.. ahem... incident IRL.
I can imagine how "comfortable" Hermione felt, when asked *that* question, and I can understand why she felt insulted by their response to her answer *shakes head*.
Ginny is beginning to seem more and more suspicious. Oh, noes! Not that there isn't something to be suspicious about when it comes down to Marcus Foster (Kinda strange to use that name, actually. I feel more comfortable saying "Tom" or "Voldemort" or even "My Lord"). Please, Ginny, don't solve it! We don't want you or Harry to get hurt... Well, that's what a part of me says. The other part says that they are bound to found out - they were from the very beginning - and it would be so action filled (or maybe not so MUCH), when they find out.
I know we found out in earlier chapters that Luna has a girlfriend, but I can't get over how FITTING it is! xD I can totally imagine THAT, not her marrying a random Rolf Scamander, no that doesn't work. xD

"Hermione was somewhat surprised over Ginny
person Shamonti
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
J'adore! chapitre merveilleux.
person Kate
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have one heck of an imagination. So hard to come across a story so good and filled with creativity. I got so drawn to this story that i read it through my exam week. Hopefully I did well but who cares, I just cant wait for the next chapter. I really enjoyed this chapter seeing how it gave more insight into Voldemort and his emotions. It was a rather calming chapter. Not alot of drama but still touching. Love it!