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by TheLadyMiya

person AlasseaM
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dadada-dummmm!

The talk with Shannon and Daniel was almost as informing as the talk Hermione and Voldemort (wondering why my spell-check can spell "Voldemort" but not "Hermione") had the first time about Shared Flame.
It is like I am less confused and yet more...
What IS is with the unborn child anyway. It seems to be that this child SHOULD be non-magical, yet is going to be magical, and the Fairies are pretty much afraid of what it might do (to which I must say: I'm still wondering what the sex of the child is, but I'll surely find out "7 years later". Translated: next chapter xD. )
I am a little more... no, I'm VERY concerned about what might happen to Althea. This chapter gave me the creeps, seriously.

"A week later, Voldemort was doing what he liked the most: fucking Hermione." - SMUT!!!
But then Harry came and ruined it all by making them speed up.
person Shamonti
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woah, did not see that one coming. And this is only part 1! I feel so spoilt that you are continuing with this awesome story. Hope 7 years flies by quikly so we the readers can know what happens in chapter 35.
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Harry, I hope you don't get yourself killed. I feel bad for you because you will do what you think is right, even if you don't have all the facts. But then again, this is LM, so you don't usually need evidence of his duplicity.
person moor
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you and your betas have really worked hard! :D
It's so amazing to see how well you write and develop the characters and plot in this story, and how much more fluidly it comes together (compared to some of the earlier fanfics you wrote).

Thank you for sharing, and looking forward to the next update!
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!
As always, the interaction between Voldemort and Althea was priceless.
"He sat down on the floor next to the door.
person AlasseaM
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I already told you that I loved the chapter, but I'll say it again. I loooooooved it :D

Voldemort was being frustrated, poor thing. O.O I didn't say that.

"She stood by the closed front door and cried out for her mother, wanting her to come back" - Awwww I remember my cousin did the same thing for me back when he was around Althea's age.

"Voldemort wanted to hit her" - I don't want to imagine what would happen if Hermione had been dead instead of on vacation. Damn...

Hahahaha, I loved it when Althea asked what happens after you die.
"He had no idea how to answer that. He would never die, so he hadn
person Shamonti
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever told you that your my favourite author in Hr/TMR Jr section? This chapter was absolute perfection. I get bored writing a review for you, because I'm a negative reviewer and I have nothing to say to you. That's why my reviews are super short.
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tom is such a bad father, shame on him for putting a silencing spell around Althea, lol. I'm sure there are many parents who wish they could do the same.

I'm wondering how long it will now before Hermione tells him she loves him because she obviously does, and I wonder what his reactions will be.

Thanks for updating.
person Kate
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter as always! I'm so happy you didnt make it all easy for Vold so that his plan would work just fine with Harry and Ginny. Nice twist!
The ending was so cute. RIP Voldemort's Clone :(
person AlasseaM
schedule December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well... I was right, wasn't I? About Althea and the fairies... *growling*
How utterly frustrating. I just want them gone... yet not. More because of the plot.
Funny enough "Morgan of the Fairies" is one of my favorite characters, even when she's the evil one, so it would be normal for me to love her, but I really, really hate her for what she's doing to Althea (Just looked up her name xD "Healer" or something like that. Hmm.. Healer for the world? xD)

Hah! I love that clone! He simply don't care what Tom will do if Hermione finds out what he thinks.
And it's very Hermione to thinks he's simply manipulating her to have sex.

Ginny believing "Marcus" and Tom were the one and same person but not /wanting/ to, is a quite good thing... It does make sense why she hadn't been telling anything.

Oooh, but Harry found out. And he's NOT amused. HIDE HARRY, HIDE! Oh... he didn't need to. xD
But heck! Tom has to use his words carefully. We all know that under the Marcus/Harry-talk in the Burrow Tom said to Harry that "the family that counts is the one you create yourself." So of course Harry would remember these words and put two and two together. Epic fail, Voldy *hides under Harry's cloak once again* I have a weird way of pissing off the Dark Lord lately O.o

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