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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dun Dun Dun! How is he going to react? And wow, Hermione is a horrible mother! She doesn't notice that her kid hasn't said a work in 3 years? That is really bad, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I get a thanks. I feel so loved now. *pats moist eyes with handkerchief*
"Tom Riddle, better known as Lord Voldemort, was having a really lousy day." - Oh noes. That never means anything good for us. *grabs emergency survival package and hides*
"which he had been supposed to win by killing Harry Potter" - Well, you got to say he's persistent. *coughs* I didn't imply stupid at all. *coughs* When at first one don't succeed, try again and again and again and again. And dare I say it AGAIN. *snnnrks*
Ah, interesting choice to apparate to, but logical as well. Nobody would be home and Snape is likely to have useful things in his house, and it's not likely they'd consider searching for him there.
"When he was reborn into this body, he had wanted it to be clear to everyone who dared lay eyes on him that he was so much more than a mere human." - Kisses Miya for taking a more realistic approach to how Voldemort would consider his snakelike looks. I never believed he wanted his "Tom Riddle" looks back (as gets done in so many fics) - he went through so much length to get rid of the memory of his father that he transformed himself into something else altogether. And I have no doubt he loved that snakelike, creepy exterior.
I absolutely enjoyed your description of the fairies, very well done. And I like how you fitted Merlin and Morgana into the fairy myths. It makes it a part of the Potter Universe that way. XD
"Merlin had counted on that." - Merlin sounds like a certain other arrogant wizard, then again, brilliant people usually have some common trades. XD
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"Tom Riddle, better known as Lord Voldemort, was having a really lousy day." - Oh noes. That never means anything good for us. *grabs emergency survival package and hides*
"which he had been supposed to win by killing Harry Potter" - Well, you got to say he's persistent. *coughs* I didn't imply stupid at all. *coughs* When at first one don't succeed, try again and again and again and again. And dare I say it AGAIN. *snnnrks*
Ah, interesting choice to apparate to, but logical as well. Nobody would be home and Snape is likely to have useful things in his house, and it's not likely they'd consider searching for him there.
"When he was reborn into this body, he had wanted it to be clear to everyone who dared lay eyes on him that he was so much more than a mere human." - Kisses Miya for taking a more realistic approach to how Voldemort would consider his snakelike looks. I never believed he wanted his "Tom Riddle" looks back (as gets done in so many fics) - he went through so much length to get rid of the memory of his father that he transformed himself into something else altogether. And I have no doubt he loved that snakelike, creepy exterior.
I absolutely enjoyed your description of the fairies, very well done. And I like how you fitted Merlin and Morgana into the fairy myths. It makes it a part of the Potter Universe that way. XD
"Merlin had counted on that." - Merlin sounds like a certain other arrogant wizard, then again, brilliant people usually have some common trades. XD
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! 'Marcus' as her professor- I am very interested in seeing where that goes! I also like that she wants to have an abortion first. I mean, I like that you wrote something that seems more realistic (in my mind) for Hermione rather than not writing it because some people don't like abortion. I also like the whole dynamic with her parents taking care of the baby and Hermione not bonding with her so much. Again, it seems like something Hermione would do, being so driven (although I have to say there are lots of OOC stories I like as well- I'm not a stickler for people acting exactly the way they did in the books). Keep up the great work!!!
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking where you're going with this, no doubt about that!
What is more, it is clearly seen that you have done some background research concerning fairies...gives it a certain feel to the tale! Those creatures might not kill but they play mercilessly - which makes them even more dangerous in that aspect. Thinking back on all folklore texts I've read, I fear that I might already have an inkling what price Morgana has in mind...a natural result of Hermione's and Voldemort's night together...their child? I might be wrong, however.
Looking forward to your update! :)
What is more, it is clearly seen that you have done some background research concerning fairies...gives it a certain feel to the tale! Those creatures might not kill but they play mercilessly - which makes them even more dangerous in that aspect. Thinking back on all folklore texts I've read, I fear that I might already have an inkling what price Morgana has in mind...a natural result of Hermione's and Voldemort's night together...their child? I might be wrong, however.
Looking forward to your update! :)
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited that you are writing a new story! I love all your stories. This sounds like it's going to be a very interesting one. I wonder what the consequences of their little tryst is going to be? Hmmm...can't wait to see where you take us!
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is starting. I want more because I LOVE your writing.